Nitelight

AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
edited March 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I was never ever really afraid of the dark just what left me one sided still
true. I liked nightlights not because I was afraid it was just the
warm presence staving off growing up without a
nighlight.
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  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    I was entitled. Hiding greatness couldn't be kept from me for long.
    In the dark pitched my point burned all night entranced faded
    fright. Mattered not outside my womb I was home with something cool. Reaching up to pull you through what is mystry me without you. The light
    never went out when the teachers pulled me in. I'd wake up just
    to live again. Return to the fetal position where the words roped
    around tendons and muscles much more strong. Winding and curving
    creating works of art true healers of life who mastered their art.
    I love my elders who know the way who are here and there every
    single day. Leading and imposing their endless love on the children
    and hearts they created from god. We seek to learn to carry on
    tradition.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    Sometimes I make a wish tossed to my well
    always with a prayer for a thoughtful care
    I check my pulse to breathe again
    unsure at all the money I spent.

    On cloudy days I look around
    on clear days I stand my ground
    I don't shout or scream anymore
    I'm silent like a slow door.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    Has a caress a warm touch to a hard edge
    forgiveness is unyeilding forever complete
    for a timeless healing.
    It bends at the knees to release the creep
    rising to walk past sole defeat.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    He drives me on no matter what
    heaven or hell it's all we do
    everything is pure whole and vast
    the everything of life that lasts and lasts
    When apart I want to run to him
    to tell him all about where I've been
    what I've learned where it's at
    yet I never do. I'm just anxious.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    Worship.
    It feels so good.
    Gazing up upon manhood.
    The dream has not died
    he is still here
    within the girl living begins.
    When we touched
    the universe rejoiced.
    I wonder how God feels
    recovering alone.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Amaterasu wrote:
    Worship.
    It feels so good.
    Gazing up upon manhood.
    The dream has not died
    he is still here
    within the girl living begins.
    When we touched
    the universe rejoiced.
    I wonder how God feels
    recovering alone.

    wow.

    this poem makes me breathe heavy.
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  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    Thank you! :) (I've recently been inspired.)
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    We are energy.
    We turn the lights on we have the power to turn it up.
    The most illusive illustration imprinted souly by touch
    Caught remembering love.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    Falls like a sunset to sunrise
    heavy blanket thick and warm
    heavens alright gods home.

    Use to be safe then left on my own
    to be safer all alone
    now I'm lonely
    safe from hell
    no one gets hurt
    no one can tell.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Amaterasu wrote:
    We are energy.
    We turn the lights on we have the power to turn it up.
    The most illusive illustration imprinted souly by touch
    Caught remembering love.



    short poem+high concept=effective writing.

    cool
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  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    The way I look at you
    isn't it cool how do you do
    isn't it cool how cold it is
    isn't cool how bold it is
    isn't it cool the substance of waste
    isn't it cool a placid lake
    isn't it cool the curse is gone
    isn't it cool we finally belong
    isn't it cool the love we share
    isn't it cool Phil's in the air
    isn't it cool we can go on
    isn't it cool we wrote the song
    isn't it cool you brought me to life
    isn't it cool we won the fight
    isn't it cool we are still alive
    isn't it cool we know why
    isn't it cool we are strong
    isnt' it cool we get along
    isnt' it cool we have names
    isn't is cool we feel the same
    isn't it cool there is more
    every time you roll the stone.

    Thank you very much for the hmm 'thats cool' comment Groovy.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    There's a man hes got a leash
    holds me down under lock and key

    wants me to quit
    just give up

    pull his chain
    choke hold

    lead

    the way

    every

    dog

    has

    it's

    day.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    her the lust of some
    the fear of him
    the darling of time
    the essence of mine
    the emptyness of all
    the heart of none
    the tie of was not
    the absence of hot
    the cool of nigh
    the hottest tough
    got the light on
    the heat up
    in my heart
    the eyes attract
    we want to feel more
    to emote ourselves at your feet
    to surge forward with grace
    to rise from our waste of being
    humble.
    You wouldn't even hear him.
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    I grow warm
    The red rolling retort
    off your red rolling tongue
    the sweetness in your voice
    so hard against the witless words
    the widened eyes, the growing sense of fear
    the clinging, ever-present taste of bitter terror
    the winding clock that goes tick tock in the dark corner
    it's the only sound harsher--or more repetitious--than the knife inside your mouth
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    gave good girls a
    name.
  • burtschipsburtschips Posts: 734
    Really good Amaterasu.
    Salut baloo
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    We have alot of power as adults
    we had alot of power as children
    we were responsible as children
    we are responsible as ourselves.
    Don't give up.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    You are the hands
    I am the clock
    we tell time
    end to start

    In from my flight
    that fitting night
    message recieved
    you were alright

    It was a good time
    the right time
    it was time to be there
    for you

    We shared the comforts
    home alone
    in the open out of the cold
    we were not afraid
    old and bold
    the same
    you and me
    seeing ourselves
    lividly free

    How to hold it make it last
    for innocence our growing past
    time again only moving the world illusion spin spin
    falling in love only an illusion
    after all just a feeling
    faithful the privelaged

    What did it matter breathing in color
    floating closer to his shelter
    it mattered we were there!
    my god we made it
    and alot of people cared!
    That was the love I understood
    more than the two of us
    more always so grand
    so impressed I gave you both my hands!
    my arms my heart my everything
    to tell the world I love you your majesty.

    Thats all I wanted to say
    You are the one
    all from me
    the girl next door
    the girl of your dreams
    nothing is what it seems
    nor can shelter a flower
    made with love
    a seed to rise above
    with every taking there is no mistaking
    love for another is accepting
    tis then I woke
    gave my being
    for another to begin

    Reign forth friendship akin
    Mister right ushered me in
    it's you always true
    did she ever hurt you?
    Don't be afraid I am love
    you my heart together won.
    I'll be here no one else matters
    I've been running from nothing
    to get closer to the problem
    let me in and lets begin
    we may never be here again...
    I've missed you most my casper ghost
    got stories to share and egos to stroke
    I'm all for you whatever you do
    my soul your temple
    God prays too
    We are the miracle
    I worship you.
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Amaterasu wrote:
    You are the hands
    I am the clock
    we tell time
    end to start

    In from my flight
    that fitting night
    message recieved
    you were alright

    It was a good time
    the right time
    it was time to be there
    for you

    We shared the comforts
    home alone
    in the open out of the cold
    we were not afraid
    old and bold
    the same
    you and me
    seeing ourselves
    lividly free

    How to hold it make it last
    for innocence our growing past
    time again only moving the world illusion spin spin
    falling in love only an illusion
    after all just a feeling
    faithful the privelaged

    What did it matter breathing in color
    floating closer to his shelter
    it mattered we were there!
    my god we made it
    and alot of people cared!
    That was the love I understood
    more than the two of us
    more always so grand
    so impressed I gave you both my hands!
    my arms my heart my everything
    to tell the world I love you your majesty.

    Thats all I wanted to say
    You are the one
    all from me
    the girl next door
    the girl of your dreams
    nothing is what it seems
    nor can shelter a flower
    made with love
    a seed to rise above
    with every taking there is no mistaking
    love for another is accepting
    tis then I woke
    gave my being
    for another to begin

    Reign forth friendship akin
    Mister right ushered me in
    it's you always true
    did she ever hurt you?
    Don't be afraid I am love
    you my heart together won.
    I'll be here no one else matters
    I've been running from nothing
    to get closer to the problem
    let me in and lets begin
    we may never be here again...
    I've missed you most my casper ghost
    got stories to share and egos to stroke
    I'm all for you whatever you do
    my soul your temple
    God prays too
    We are the miracle
    I worship you.

    i'm knocked out by this thread beginning to end...but there is something so lovely in this that made my heart :D
  • i once had sex with a cow,

    it went meow, meow

    turned out it was a cat

    diddly diiddly dat

    and that's the end of that
    If anyone has any good ideas for band names PM me cause me and my band are amazingly stuck for ideas. Darn that band Pearl Jam for having such a cool name
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    Coleen :) x.

    O~ You should read more Dr.Suess
    another scratch at Cat In The Hat...perhaps...
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