10 o'clock - poem

APlasticNationAPlasticNation Posts: 63
Its 10 o'clock an I wish I could stay,

to be with you all day.

Its 10 o'clock and its yesterday,

I feel your love like it was in May.

Its 10 o'clock and I have to go,

i'm sorry I have nothing to show.

Its 10 o'clock and my last words will be,

come hold me and that I love thee.

Its 10 o'clock and i want you to know,

I love you so much with my heart of gold.

Its 10 o'clock my tears are dry.

Its 10 o'clock i don't wanna die.

Its 10 o'clock don't let me go.

Its 10 o'clock i have to know.

Will you be all right when I go?

Because its 10 O one and I am done.

You know you were the only one.
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  • i really really liked that
    that conjured up a great little tune in my head as I read through it
    Some people have to have the sultry evenings Cocktails in the blue, red and grey But I like every minute of the day.
    INTER-FUCKING-MISSION!!!
    Newcastle-Riverside 02/22/92!!!
    E.rutherford New Jersey 01/06/06
    Athens -Greece.survived !barely-
    Wembley 18/06/07- no words- just smiles!
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Way cool approach. A poem that sits in the time span of 60 seconds.

    You know, Stephen King once wrote a story called the 10 o'Clock People.
    Good stuff.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    my love is dead
    im empty in the head
    i dont care i wont eat bread

    revenge

    my light is dark
    my eyes are in your dinner
    my hands are cut off

    revenge

    vengeance



    no love here
    convicted
  • waitin watching it's 10 o clock...
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