Poem - I'll be here (comments welcome!)

APlasticNationAPlasticNation Posts: 63
edited January 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
And I hold you in my eyes
like an angel given rise
from the heavens light
that emanates around you

as i caress your gentle face
I hunger for your taste
taste of sweet serenity
as the stars shine down on me

ohhh ohhhh I'm gunna let you know
ohhh ohhhh I'm wanna let you know
I'll be here
I'll be here

and you climb into my arms
arms of comfort, desired charm
our hearts beat together
as the earth moves.. in the distance

time is fading fast
beating the hour glass
for where theres no part for me
but my dreams you'll always be
my dreams you'll be

ohhh ohhhh I'm gunna let you know
ohhh ohhhh I'm wanna let you know
I'll be here
I'll be here

And you say its time to go
to place too far for me to know
to where all time is lost
for the lights are so blinding

and though you seem so far away
cant make it through the ageless day
without thinking of the next time
when you'll throw your arms around me


and i dream i dream of you
dream that someday they'll come true
i dream i dream of you
hoping someday it will be me and you

ohhh ohhhh I'm gunna let you know
ohhh ohhhh I'm wanna let you know
I'll never let you go
I'll never let you go

ohhh ohhhh I'm gunna let you know
ohhh ohhhh I'm wanna let you know
I'll be here
I'll be here
for you...
Hatford '96 Albany '03 Boston 1 '98 Uniondale '03
8/29/00 8/30/00 Boston 1, 2, 3 '03 Boston 1, 2 '04
Montreal '05 Ottawa '05 Albany '06 Hartford '06
Boston 1, 2 '06 Columbia, SC '08 Virginia Beach '08 Camden 1, 2 '08 Washington D.C. '08 Hartford '08
Boston 1, 2 '08
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Comments

  • call it what you will, of course. but, i think this is a song. do you play?
  • I wish I did. I usually have a nice melody in my head when I write. I actually bought a new guitar today and I am trying to learn so maybe someday I can play for the masses or just a few people. I've had a guitar for about 10 years but never stuck with it, but bought the new guitar because the pretty much broke the one I had so hopefully ill stick with it and learn something.
    Hatford '96 Albany '03 Boston 1 '98 Uniondale '03
    8/29/00 8/30/00 Boston 1, 2, 3 '03 Boston 1, 2 '04
    Montreal '05 Ottawa '05 Albany '06 Hartford '06
    Boston 1, 2 '06 Columbia, SC '08 Virginia Beach '08 Camden 1, 2 '08 Washington D.C. '08 Hartford '08
    Boston 1, 2 '08
  • cool. good luck with that! :)
  • eulussoeulusso Posts: 50
    .... I've had a guitar for about 10 years but never stuck with it, but bought the new guitar because the pretty much broke the one I had so hopefully ill stick with it and learn something.

    great, so we are at least 2, i've had a guitar for 10 years, bought a new one i love, now i want to play guitar, instead of playing with it...
    what's your new guitar?
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