i just wrote this song today...
throwingcopper
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i just wrote this song today very quickly... can anyone tell me what it's about?... your interpretations.
i know what it's about but, i just thought i'd post it to see if anyone else could figure out the story.
here's the song:
i stumbled around town
with a bottle in my hand
walking the streets
i feel like i'm getting old
what's going on?
what's going on tonight?
i stop by the bar and grab another beer
i chug the beer down
and look around
there's a lot of people in here
15 minutes later
i drink another one
i grab a bottle of booze just for fun
and something to do
i look around again, and noone is around
was i awake?
was i asleep the whole time?
well, i guess it's time to go
i step outside
feel the warm air
walk out to the sidewalk
and stumble around
with my bottle in my hand
what is it?
well, i don't know
but, it's tastes cheap
i've got a pretty good buzz now
so, i hand my bottle to a homeless man as we talk for a while
what happened to you? i ask.
well, i was in the war
then my wife left, he replied
well, that's not cool, i said
he replied, yeah, she was the one i loved
that's why i'm here
i wanted to forget about the past with noone else
well, good talking to you, man
i hope you start to look up
i got back on my feet
and onto the street
it was winter outside
i was tired, hungry, and needed to get clean
i checked into rehab
and got what i needed
a warm bed and a new key
a key to life
and the drugs i didn't need
i know what it's about but, i just thought i'd post it to see if anyone else could figure out the story.
here's the song:
i stumbled around town
with a bottle in my hand
walking the streets
i feel like i'm getting old
what's going on?
what's going on tonight?
i stop by the bar and grab another beer
i chug the beer down
and look around
there's a lot of people in here
15 minutes later
i drink another one
i grab a bottle of booze just for fun
and something to do
i look around again, and noone is around
was i awake?
was i asleep the whole time?
well, i guess it's time to go
i step outside
feel the warm air
walk out to the sidewalk
and stumble around
with my bottle in my hand
what is it?
well, i don't know
but, it's tastes cheap
i've got a pretty good buzz now
so, i hand my bottle to a homeless man as we talk for a while
what happened to you? i ask.
well, i was in the war
then my wife left, he replied
well, that's not cool, i said
he replied, yeah, she was the one i loved
that's why i'm here
i wanted to forget about the past with noone else
well, good talking to you, man
i hope you start to look up
i got back on my feet
and onto the street
it was winter outside
i was tired, hungry, and needed to get clean
i checked into rehab
and got what i needed
a warm bed and a new key
a key to life
and the drugs i didn't need
music. love. life.
the stickman's ghost: www.myspace.com/yield1914
the stickman's ghost: www.myspace.com/yield1914
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part of it's right but, there's more to it... and there's no woman in the picture.
it's not about me either... nor is it about someone i know... it's not based on any certain story, just a fictional character... could be anyone.
there;s just one detail that you didn't quite get... pay attention to the "seasons changing."
the stickman's ghost: www.myspace.com/yield1914
not on the right track but, close to it... i'm sure that he did lose track of time because he was an alchoholic/user but, he was also homeless.
the stickman's ghost: www.myspace.com/yield1914