giving myself to you

August storm

i have given my all to you
gave you a smile the day we met
i gave you my thoughts before i left
you asked me to stay and live
away from my father,was hard for me to give
i gave you that,
then i gave you me,
then you gave me my kids,
i give them my time,my love and many more gifts
now i give you my time,my mind and energy
i give you smiles,hope, this is all free,
becuase in return nothing is given to me!
my chidren pay me in love,for that i give them all the above,
the only thing i get from you is a bunch of lies,
i thought it was supposed to be 50/50
i give 100, you give me none!
alot of harassment,
so little of your love....
do not worry i am strong not weak,
for i will keep giving, for you , every day of the week,
my love is special a gift for so many,
i will always love ,even if it kills me!

loveandrew-wood

this poem is alright
i personally hope that its art and not a true emotion because
really you have control of you life and dont let anyone tell ya different


in jesus name
amen

August storm

this poem is about my true emotion but not an every day one sometimes i feel lonely and without him, i feel i do give my all,and like most do not get it in return,beleive me i know i have control of me, but control is the easy way out sometimes things should be more difficult. i think in life things -like love can only make us stronger, and for me im not crazy i know my husband loves me, this poem is suggesting he should show it in other ways and not be so bottled up. and it also shows how im open to telling things about me that he is not. i hope this is a good explanation of my poem...........

BhagavadGita

Originally posted by August storm
this poem is about my true emotion but not an every day one sometimes i feel lonely and without him, i feel i do give my all,and like most do not get it in return,beleive me i know i have control of me, but control is the easy way out sometimes things should be more difficult. i think in life things -like love can only make us stronger, and for me im not crazy i know my husband loves me, this poem is suggesting he should show it in other ways and not be so bottled up. and it also shows how im open to telling things about me that he is not. i hope this is a good explanation of my poem...........

my sentiments exactly. what happen to love and youth and
WILD ABANDON!!

it guess it abonded us? NOT. thanks for posting my exact thoughts. i mean aBANDdoned us.

August storm

Originally posted by BhagavadGita
my sentiments exactly. what happen to love and youth and
WILD ABANDON!!

it guess it abonded us? NOT. thanks for posting my exact thoughts. i mean aBANDdoned us.

thank you for taking the time to read it, and your welcome.

VedderGirl27

Booboo, I love ALL of your poems, but this one is so me! You already know that though.

seekit

from time to time the same page of your poem is my story.
i agree that love is difficult and while some is sweet, some is bitter. the longer i live the more i'm convinced it's always flows on and on, good, bad and the in between.
thank you...........for sharing...........your words..........

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