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warmth

August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
holding your child on a chilly winter night
feeling his hand hold your night shirt so tight,
resting my head on my husbands chest to sleep,
feeling his arm wrapped around me.
whats good for the goose is good for the gander
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    if that isn't a moment of perfection, i don't know what is. :)
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    my thoughts exactly thank you for the reply:)
    somethings are better when they are short and right to the point and this is my best way of describing the word warmth:)
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    This reminds me of something I wrote last night, actually... about mah hunny. I don't have it with me, so I'll have to paraphrase. Bear with me. :)

    ~~~

    Cuddled (approximately)
    November 24, 2003

    Her lips curled north to a smile -
    as genuine as it was subtle in sleep -
    upon laying my arm across her

    The warmth of my touch invaded her dreams
    so that she may know love there, too,
    and never be without it
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    This reminds me of something I wrote last night, actually... about mah hunny. I don't have it with me, so I'll have to paraphrase. Bear with me. :)

    ~~~

    Cuddled (approximately)
    November 24, 2003

    Her lips curled north to a smile -
    as genuine as it was subtle in sleep -
    upon laying my arm across her

    The warmth of my touch invaded her dreams
    so that she may know love there, too,
    and never be without it

    this is one of the most beautiful things i have ever read :)

    glad you've returned cmr.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    This reminds me of something I wrote last night, actually... about mah hunny. I don't have it with me, so I'll have to paraphrase. Bear with me. :)

    ~~~

    Cuddled (approximately)
    November 24, 2003

    Her lips curled north to a smile -
    as genuine as it was subtle in sleep -
    upon laying my arm across her

    The warmth of my touch invaded her dreams
    so that she may know love there, too,
    and never be without it

    That IS SO touching! Nice to see you back SickHeadRules! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    I wrote it down on a piece of paper and slid it under the bathroom door while she was in the bathtub soaking.

    I'm such a dope.
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    I wrote it down on a piece of paper and slid it under the bathroom door while she was in the bathtub soaking.

    I'm such a dope.

    Yeah ;), but a sweet dope! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    This reminds me of something I wrote last night, actually... about mah hunny. I don't have it with me, so I'll have to paraphrase. Bear with me. :)

    ~~~

    Cuddled (approximately)
    November 24, 2003

    Her lips curled north to a smile -
    as genuine as it was subtle in sleep -
    upon laying my arm across her

    The warmth of my touch invaded her dreams
    so that she may know love there, too,
    and never be without it
    that was so nice i wish my hubby would write things like that about me:) your wife is blessed
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by August storm
    that was so nice i wish my hubby would write things like that about me:) your wife is blessed

    Not my wife yet! But thank you anyway!
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  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    Not my wife yet! But thank you anyway!
    im sorry and your welcome and good luck! :)
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
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