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the time(dedicated to TONY)

August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the time you take to spend with me ,
your friendship means so much.
talking , laughing, getting upset together,
you know what they say about two birds flocking.
when i have not seen you in a short spell,
i look for reasons to give you a call.
ill never forget a small sentence stated to me,
when you said we were friends not just family!
you may not see it , but i do,
i get courage , love and strength from you.
lately i wonder who understands me ,
it seems to be you.
when i look at you i see a man who wonders what others see,
for me i see one who loved for an eternity,
caring, strong, honerable, and proud.
its like im looking in a mirror when it comes to the soul,
one who wonders about life and wisdom,
enjoying the simple things like a little conversation,
one of things that i see most is when you look at children your face seems to glow.
i look at all and question what is there position right now,
and i see you , and sometimes you look lonely to me,
the question i see from you is are you loved?
the secret question i have formed from you i shall answer,
i love you and the family does too!
i have a gift of a spoken word, some have not been blessed like i have, and keep it inside like a very aged fine wine.
i just wanted to say thank you for your time.

love,
curry
whats good for the goose is good for the gander
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Comments

  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :) So sweet, Miss curry! :)

    Brings a smile to my face!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    aww ty this is a poem about my husbands grandfather:)
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by August storm
    aww ty this is a poem about my husbands grandfather:)

    Were you the one who wrote the poem a while back about your morning coffee's with him where he told you he was ill??

    I'm not sure if it was you but the love in that one reminds me of the love shown in this one and it's just so touching and sweet! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    yes its the same one, he just told me over coffee two days ago that he thinks of me as not family , but his dear friend instead:) so it inspired me to write this poem.
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by August storm
    yes its the same one, he just told me over coffee two days ago that he thinks of me as not family , but his dear friend instead:) so it inspired me to write this poem.

    You rock! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    You rock! :)
    your sweet thank you:)
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
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