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Frances

Eddie_Vedder_83Eddie_Vedder_83 Posts: 281
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Frances 09-02-04 5:21

silence and beauty
the distastrous consequenses
are for now denied
murderer around the bend
waiting for the inevitable
the splashing and crashing
anxious shivering
cold and lonely
wandering hours
wondering hours
hit me......


kind of the feeling i'm having about Hurricane Frances
i know it's not a masterpiece but just wanted to share.

thanks for reading
~It is better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not - ?~

~You laugh because I am different, I laugh because you are all the fucking same -?~

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Comments

  • windedsailorwindedsailor Posts: 98
    be safe, and hold on tight.
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    gets her revenge
  • A HitchHiker PoetA HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    I like the cold and lonely part
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I dig it. Really dig the last three lines...cool...
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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    my best friend just recently moved to w palm beach.. he's bracing for the worst.. let's all hope that frances calms down a bit before landing..
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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