Dead Bread

Eddie_Vedder_83Eddie_Vedder_83 Posts: 281
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
First off, i barely post here because i'm kinda afraid of plagiarism, so therefor i post sometimes my "aaaaahhhh allright" kinda stuff. In that case i won't cry over the fact if it gets stolen :).

this one is about a dutch artist whom..... well you should be able to find out next what happened with him

Dead Bread

arms wide open, he has jumped the ledge
slowly hovering wanting to become one
mixing himself with the other shit in the lawn
he turns to soil with his fleshless bones
the master of all muscles leaves him alone
he don't need no forgiveness nor any sympathy
just let him throw himself toward where he needs to go
as he slides down the the loneliest highway, godspeed
high as god, when the street offers destiny

it set him free
it set him free

his conscience was his mood
his conscience was the wound
his conscience left this world
~It is better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not - ?~

~You laugh because I am different, I laugh because you are all the fucking same -?~

~Education is the most powerfull weapon you can use to change the world - Nelson Mandela~
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  • 99% shameless Bump
    ~It is better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not - ?~

    ~You laugh because I am different, I laugh because you are all the fucking same -?~

    ~Education is the most powerfull weapon you can use to change the world - Nelson Mandela~
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    99% shameless Bump

    I like it. I really like some of the imagery. But the thought of suicide is so disturbing to me. I know a number of people who have tried it or come one step from doing it because they felt so bad at that moment, but then their lives changed dramatically and they had so much to live for, so much they nearly lost. (I include myself in this lot of people. didn't do it, but so close)
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    I don't know if it is obvious or too criptic, but the following is also about suicide......

    Go now and take your brother
    tell your mother that I love her
    (what about us?)
    Just go now son and tell you mum
    that I have a gun, but I love her

    lightning cut the sky, there was fear in their eyes
    as they turned for the long walk home
    thunder rang high, rang loud to disguise
    the sound they never heard

    Rain began to fall, "It was thunder, that's all"
    They said as they ran home
    And the water on their face, just rain with a salty taste
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Bump #2 for THE DEAD POETS SOCIETY (OF PEARL JAM"S SYNERGY)


    great subject matter
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • thanks for the replies and hacks haha, but yeah this guy was just really sad to look at, i've met him a couple of times downtown of where i used to live and he always walked around with a parrot on his shoulder. he is or was i should say a funny awkard kinda guy. very friendly. He jumped of the rooftop of the Hilton hotel in Amsterdam i believe in the summer of 02, the Hilton because he wanted to go classy.....i do miss him because i liked him a lot, but he had to deal with so much pain and so much criticism that i am happy for him for the fact that this is what he wanted and he did it. very fuckin selfish though leaving a wife, a bunch a mistresses and underage children, husband, lover and fatherless.
    ~It is better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not - ?~

    ~You laugh because I am different, I laugh because you are all the fucking same -?~

    ~Education is the most powerfull weapon you can use to change the world - Nelson Mandela~
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