-had my full-

red mozzie

for too long now
i've been over-brimming
you've had my fill
i'll bleed no more
when it's our screams you dont hear
{broken wings}
and i'll feel no more
when in hell, is where i sit
watched as sailors went overboard
all the while, you sat back
and did not a thing
well don't need you to breathe
'cause before you,
was already handling on my own
and when it's the echoes you refuse to hear
it's your shit, you can keep
i've awakened
{mended wings}
i'll take back
what you stole from me
'cause i've had my fill of you
and no more i'll bleed
been going on for too long now
when insouciance can't ascend
from the echoes that aren't heard
yeh, you've had your last fill from me
watch now, 'cause i'm just one more sailor gone
.. overboard

whispering hands

that was incredible!!! it's moving and so well presented.. so well written! love it!

chadwick

yea this is good..i'll read it over several times..thanks

red mozzie

hey thanks¡ x 2