Post the ONE poem that has influenced you the most!!

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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    wow...lots of Dylan fans hanging out around here!!!
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  • steppenwolfsteppenwolf Posts: 164
    wow...lots of Dylan fans hanging out around here!!!

    and rightfully so.
    man, my mind is sort of muddled now,
    under the hue of amber
    if I a-had a poem to give,
    it would definitely be
    from Bob Drillin'
  • for me, the most influential poem of my life is this Dylan Thomas poem...



    The Force That Through the Green Fuse Drives the Flower


    The force that through the green fuse drives the flower
    Drives my green age; that blasts the roots of trees
    Is my destroyer.
    And I am dumb to tell the crooked rose
    My youth is bent by the same wintry fever.

    The force that drives the water through the rocks
    Drives my red blood; that dries the mouthing streams
    Turns mine to wax.
    And I am dumb to mouth unto my veins
    How at the mountain spring the same mouth sucks.

    The hand that whirls the water in the pool
    Stirs the quicksand; that ropes the blowing wind
    Hauls my shroud sail.
    And I am dumb to tell the hanging man
    How of my clay is made the hangman's lime.

    The lips of time leech to the fountain head;
    Love drips and gathers, but the fallen blood
    Shall calm her sores.
    And I am dumb to tell a weather's wind
    How time has ticked a heaven round the stars.

    And I am dumb to tell the lover's tomb
    How at my sheet goes the same crooked worm.
    the Hound
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    This is just to say... by Williams Carlos Williams

    I have eaten
    the plums
    that were in
    the icebox

    and which
    you were probably
    saving
    for breakfast

    Forgive me
    they were delicious
    so sweet
    and so cold
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    translation by Ezra Pound

    While my hair was still cut straight across my forehead
    I played about the front gate, pulling flowers
    You came by on bamboo stilts, playing horse,
    You walked about my seat, playing with blue plums
    And we went on living in the village of Chokan:
    Two small people, without dislike or suspicion.

    At fourteen I married My Lord you.
    I never laughed, being bashful.
    Lowering my head, I looked at the wall.
    Called to, a thousand times, I never looked back.

    At fifteen I stopped scowling,
    I desired my dust to be mingled with yours
    Forever and forever, and forever.
    Why should I climb the look out?

    At sixteen you departed,
    You went into far Ku-to-Yen, by the river of swirling eddies,
    And you have been gone five months.
    The monkeys make sorrowful noise overhead.

    You dragged your feet when you went out.
    By the gate now, the moss is grown, the different mosses,
    Too deep to clear them away!
    The leaves fall early this autumn, in wind.
    The paired butterflies are already yellow with August
    Over the grass in the West garden,
    They hurt me.
    I grow older,
    If you are coming down through the narrows of the river Kiang,
    Please let me know beforehand,
    And I will come out to meet you,
    As far as Cho-fu-Sa.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    PastaNazi wrote:
    This is just to say... by Williams Carlos Williams

    I have eaten
    the plums
    that were in
    the icebox

    and which
    you were probably
    saving
    for breakfast

    Forgive me
    they were delicious
    so sweet
    and so cold

    Yes!! I had forgotten all about this one!! I love this so much! Thanks for bringing this gem back to me...!
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  • shareshare Posts: 551
    St.KittsAP wrote:
    sorry folks, I thought I had put Leonard Cohen's name at the end of the poem. 'cause it's his.

    for shame

    I'm a BAD canadian!!!!

    hehe
    we're all sentient snowflakes
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    I'm a number that doesn't count
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    the nothing ventured - the nothing feigned
  • batmanbatman Posts: 11
    I

    I LIE upon my bed and hear and see.
    The moon is rising through the glistening trees;
    And momently a great and sombre breeze,
    With a vast voice returning fitfully,
    Comes like a deep-toned grief, and stirs in me,
    Somehow, by some inexplicable art,
    A sense of my soul's strangeness, and its part
    In the dark march of human destiny.
    What am I, then, and what are they that pass
    Yonder, and love and laugh, and mourn and weep?
    What shall they know of me, or I, alas!

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    Of them? Little. At times, as if from sleep,
    We waken to this yearning passionate mood,
    And tremble at our spiritual solitude.

    II

    Nay, never once to feel we are alone,
    While the great human heart around us lies:
    To make the smile on other lips our own,
    To live upon the light in others' eyes:
    To breathe without a doubt the limped air
    Of that most perfect love that knows no pain:
    To say–I love you–only, and not care
    Whether the love come back to us again:
    Divinest self-forgetfulness, at first
    A task, and then a tonic, then a need;
    To greet with open hands the best and worst,
    And only for another's wound to bleed:
    This is to see the beauty that God meant,
    Wrapped round with life, ineffably content.

    III

    There is a beauty at the goal of life,
    A beauty growing since the world began,
    Through every age and race, through lapse and strife
    Till the great human soul complete her span.
    Beneath the waves of storm that lash and burn,
    The currents of blind passion that appall,
    To listen and keep watch till we discern
    The tide of sovereign truth that guides it all;
    So to address our spirits to the height,
    And so attune them to the valiant whole,
    That the great light be clearer for our light,
    And the great soul the stronger for our soul:
    To have done this is to have lived, though fame
    Remember us with no familiar name.




    I love it SO MUCH.
    amanda heard the phone ring in her womb.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Batman---thanks for introducing me to that poem!!!!
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  • I Am Vertical



    But I would rather be horizontal.
    I am not a tree with my root in the soil
    Sucking up minerals and motherly love
    So that each March I may gleam into leaf,
    Nor am I the beauty of a garden bed
    Attracting my share of Ahs and spectacularly painted,
    Unknowing I must soon unpetal.
    Compared with me, a tree is immortal
    And a flower-head not tall, but more startling,
    And I want the one's longevity and the other's daring.

    Tonight, in the infinitesimal light of the stars,
    The trees and flowers have been strewing their cool odors.
    I walk among them, but none of them are noticing.
    Sometimes I think that when I am sleeping
    I must most perfectly resemble them--
    Thoughts gone dim.
    It is more natural to me, lying down.
    Then the sky and I are in open conversation,
    And I shall be useful when I lie down finally:
    Then the trees may touch me for once, and the flowers have time for me.
    I used to put strange things in newspaper machines just to freak people out. I grew out of that.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ah, Plath! I had almost forgotten Plath! And what a good one, too...

    One of the best closing two lines ever, imo.
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  • Ah, Plath! I had almost forgotten Plath! And what a good one, too...

    One of the best closing two lines ever, imo.

    She rules! Most people are all about "Daddy" but I don't think you can beat "I am Vertical".....

    have you seen the movie Sylvia?
    I used to put strange things in newspaper machines just to freak people out. I grew out of that.
  • She rules! Most people are all about "Daddy" but I don't think you can beat "I am Vertical".....

    have you seen the movie Sylvia?

    I saw it and hated it, sorry. Sylvia was here in Cambridge, you know. She won a Fulbright scholarship and went to Newnham. She lived in Eltisley Avenue, around the corner from Grantchester Meadows (made famous by Rupert Brooke and, in rock music, Pink Floyd); she made a big impression here and, by some personal accounts I've heard, she wasn't a victim character at all. She was pretty strident, popular, and glamourous.
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    You hold on like no other
    You were caught as you came out of life
    To re-enter it
    I don't know if it's in one direction or in another that you shake the
    garden gate
    You have raised up to your heart the serpentine grass
    And forever curled the birds of paradise in the hoarse sky
    Your gaze is clairvoyant
    You are seated
    And we too are seated
    The skull for a few more days
    In the dip of our features
    All of our acts before us
    At arm's length
    In the little ones' vine tendril
    You are feeding us a line on existentialism
    There are no flies on you

    published as part of the poem cycle Xenophiles, in Poemes.
    Ca. 1947,
    translated by Jean-Pierre Cauvin and Mary Anne Caws
  • I saw it and hated it, sorry. Sylvia was here in Cambridge, you know. She won a Fulbright scholarship and went to Newnham. She lived in Eltisley Avenue, around the corner from Grantchester Meadows (made famous by Rupert Brooke and, in rock music, Pink Floyd); she made a big impression here and, by some personal accounts I've heard, she wasn't a victim character at all. She was pretty strident, popular, and glamourous.

    This is interesting. Changes my ideas about her--and about her poems.

    Is there a good, reliable biography out there?
    I used to put strange things in newspaper machines just to freak people out. I grew out of that.
  • This is interesting. Changes my ideas about her--and about her poems.

    Is there a good, reliable biography out there?

    Try "The Death and Life of Sylvia Plath" by Ronald Hayman, and "The Journals of Sylvia Plath", edited by Karen V. Kukil.

    Here are some links:

    http://www.sylviaplath.de/

    http://www.sylviaplathforum.com/

    http://www.neuroticpoets.com/plath/

    But Plath was very complex. She did have many sides, introverted as well as extroverted.

    I'll try and find the audio recording of her reading her poetry. It's stunning because her voice is hard, deep, firm and confident; not what you might expect.
  • Thanks Finsbury! I'm excited about rediscovering Plath....
    I used to put strange things in newspaper machines just to freak people out. I grew out of that.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    john girl wrote:
    All of our acts before us
    At arm's length
    In the little ones' vine tendril
    You are feeding us a line on existentialism
    There are no flies on you

    This here is seriously cool......
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  • Grass

    Pile the bodies high at Austerlitz and Waterloo.
    Shovel them under and let me work--
    I am the grass; I cover all.

    And pile them high at Gettysburg
    And pile them high at Ypres and Verdun.
    Shovel them under and let me work.
    Two years, ten years, and the passengers ask the conductor:
    What place is this?
    Where are we now?

    I am the grass.
    Let me work.
    i can still bite my toenails.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Sandburg!! Yay!! you guys are just too good....
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