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In Love Again

grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I am in love again,
But this time
Is not
Like the others:

Her smile is a parachute,
And she breathes sweet moist air
Into my face
While we sleep.
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Comments

  • alicefellalicefell Posts: 30
    sigh..........
    there is no other way.
    and there never was.
  • pearlmuttpearlmutt Posts: 392
    awww, groove, that's awesome

    "hail hail to the lucky ones"
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I like the idea of "her smile is a parachute" because to me, this poem made me automatically think "falling" in love again. The idea of the falling and her smile as your parachute just seems so perfectly beautiful to me. I love it! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,289
    I really liked the "smile is a parachute" line, too. It made me think of a safety net, comforting.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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