What Do You Know of Unhappiness?

grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
What do you know of unhappiness
You slathering happy fools?
You with your gallon lattes
Bermuda shorts from last fall
Tailored Dolces that smell like
Leather
And candid cellphone snapshots,
What do you know of unhappiness?

And what are you going to think of
When all this time runs out
Has you by your throat is choking you
And all those stacked unhappy moments
Fade with your peripheral vision?
Sports cars? Swimming?
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Comments

  • very punk I like it!!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • VEDHEAD27VEDHEAD27 Posts: 3,091
    EH! That bad boy packs a punch!

    Love it groove. :)
    ¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤

    "Lo√e, you know the word
    ...YOU invented it!" ~ E√

    ¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤
    ...::STONE--YOU--OWN!::...
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  • Dang! That's full of venom and it's a great read, groove! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Thanks you guys!! It is a bit more venomous than my normal fare....it began with the language, not the content, so it sort wrote itself. But I suppose I am still responsible for it.... :)
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  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    love it
    ...
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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