And To Keep His Eyes Open He Sits With a Newspaper Quietly

grooveamatic

The town has a hollow sound
This morning;
The firing of spark plugs
And the whispers of birds
Echo from tin buildings;
Footsteps fall on slate pavement.

Where has gone the solid world 'neath our feet?

Ah, but the sun rises and sets quietly
Upon the world of the ubiquitous dead.

justam

(I'll be noisy)


I LIKE THIS ONE!!

Ali

Groove...glad to see you writing so fluidly:)
Youre writings constantly amaze me.

This one is oh so true as my neighbors awoke me from my afternoon nap by plummetting into my car :)It can be fixed though babe.

Love your vocabulary as well.

Call me when it gets close to show time....

love to you...
allison:D

grooveamatic

Ali wrote:

Groove...glad to see you writing so fluidly:)
Youre writings constantly amaze me.

This one is oh so true as my neighbors awoke me from my afternoon nap by plummetting into my car :)It can be fixed though babe.

Love your vocabulary as well.

Call me when it gets close to show time....

love to you...
allison:D

thanks hon...i wasn't sure if this one would make sense to people....

sorry about your car....is it out of commision for awhile?

I will most certainly be in touch close to show time...

love right back to ya,
seth

Ali

grooveamatic wrote:

thanks hon...i wasn't sure if this one would make sense to people....

sorry about your car....is it out of commision for awhile?

I will most certainly be in touch close to show time...

love right back to ya,
seth

I think it made total sense.
Going to the borgata to hang out next Fri?


allison

grooveamatic

Ali wrote:

I think it made total sense.
Going to the borgata to hang out next Fri?


allison

nope....gotta work and all that...

i forget, did you get a ticket, or just have the room?

Righteous Jammer

The Sun Was Quietly Setting While I Read Your Poem....pure Beauty

grooveamatic

a poet wrote:

The Sun Was Quietly Setting While I Read Your Poem....pure Beauty

thanks...you are too kind!

ISN

you so cleverly captured that most elusive of feelings - emptiness.....such a diffiucult feeling to describe......but your poem is almost oriental in its ability to say very much with not too many words.......I am as always, very impressed......I write volumes about my varying passions, but can't evoke as much as you do.......you're a fine poet Groove

grooveamatic

ISN wrote:

you so cleverly captured that most elusive of feelings - emptiness.....such a diffiucult feeling to describe......but your poem is almost oriental in its ability to say very much with not too many words.......I am as always, very impressed......I write volumes about my varying passions, but can't evoke as much as you do.......you're a fine poet Groove

And you, as always, are more kind than you have to be.

pearlmutt

thanks for such a good one