unseen- a poem for BhagavadGita

time2escapetime2escape Posts: 178
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
mix these words that i say
mean nothing that way
the beautiful unseen
drifting by me

lines we erase , they seem far away
mix these words i say
beautiful unseen
drifting by me

a hopeless forgotten
love, one never to know
a beautiful kiss
eyes with seasons change and glow

my friend
your word is my strength again
you are my only friend
help me until the end
of the beautiful unseen
"thiers still time to escape, youve got time to escape
thiers still time so escape,,,,
auuuhhheehhh yaeeahh "
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  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    time2escape....

    what have i done to deserve such beautiful lines.

    friend, you have me if you want me.

    i am here all day, until the next, alone

    waiting for your choices

    i feel so warm, on such a sad and rainy day.

    now the sun comes thru,

    thank you
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    i know thats a poem
    my thought is this
    if you only friend leaves
    you all alone and you
    cant think of anyone to
    console you
    dont give up
    because regardless
    someone always loves you
    and someone will suffer
    the decisions you make
    for what really in the end
    amounts to a selfish decision

    dont give up
    convicted
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    never giving up
    never giving in

    i don't think we ever give up
    when i comes to love, how can we?
    that seed was planted in our hearts, its going to grow until it blooms and knowing that is what makes it grow i think.

    forgive me because i may ramble off the subject...

    how good it feels when someone loves us in a poem. i have never felt this before. my mind can not find the words right now to describe it. Timetoescape, have you found your way out yet?

    sometimes i feel like kevin might be right and im just living in a poem nothing more. again, the words escape me...

    except...

    for saying the name of the man who has changed my life. the man who has haunted my dreams, the man who seems so omni- something i dont know, as if i have just understood the theory of realitivity by hearing his voice. this man, oh god how i love him and how i wish to scream his name on this board everyday. i can see HE in ALL of you, to me.

    and each sweet honeyed word envelopes my heart in more knowing, nutrients to my acceptance of the fact that maybe, god oh maybe, fairy tales can come true and someday it will be ok to REALLY tell him here..i believe in miracles eddie.

    I gave away a story in my head, i should say, i put it away and down, but maybe i didnt. maybe someone saw my fear of my confession in all it's mental ugliness. maybe they felt sorry for me and thus, why i am here.

    am i suppose to say it, HERE, in front of all youS people and not be ashamed of hiding it away. which my head has done to me, but my heart wont quit.

    YOU are everywhere. everywhere.

    look my love, stars are everywhere. It is your force that brought me here, am i on your leash as well? i think the student finally deserves to touch the hand that lead her along...

    how i love you today and as i have for always and ways
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