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dream

Psa144Psa144 Posts: 17
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
ripple effect
deep swells
swollen river
raging and falling
crashing down
to the rocks below
deep forest dream
I'm walking with freedom
everything else is gone
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  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    liberation in a nutshell.

    almost whips out like a gunshot.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Psa144Psa144 Posts: 17
    thanks. It's great to have a place to post things - icing on the cake to get feedback:). Originally from Colorado myself so I do tend to trip on outdoorsy things too much.
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