today...

Squirrel

well, this just came out of me today...

I think
I've sallowed an earthquake
by mistake
have to spit it out
will throw up those miseries
don't need them inside
shaking up my mind
gotta get them out

but I'm still trembling...



uhm...does it tell you anything??

Radar(Baba)O'Riley

That you're California?

Very concise and subtle metaphor all the way through. Well handled.

Squirrel

haha..like the california allusion..haven't thought of it that way yet..thanx