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A Kite with No String

kevinbeetlekevinbeetle Posts: 358
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Life, all rolled up
holding on to one thing in life.
Free for moments of time
but always reverts to the same space.
Nowhere to go unless someone allows you.
Strong winds break bonds and frees
myself
from
it
all
Going on
forever like a
soaring eagle.
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  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    Is like a dog with no tail.

    Dude, you need to get help!
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
  • Floyd ManzeraFloyd Manzera Posts: 82
    kevinbeetle wrote:
    Life, all rolled up
    holding on to one thing in life.
    Free for moments of time
    but always reverts to the same space.
    Nowhere to go unless someone allows you.
    Strong winds break bonds and frees
    myself
    from
    it
    all
    Going on
    forever like a
    soaring eagle.
    this flows like a motherfucker.
    congrats kev...your excellence is amazing and so synchronous, it is going to flip people out.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • tekno_junkietekno_junkie Posts: 87
    This was deep and beautiful... I shed a Tear... *claps*
    Nobody sits like this rock sits. You rock, rock. The rock just sits and is. You show us how to just sit here and that's what we need.
  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    tekno_junkie wrote:
    This was deep and beautiful... I shed a Tear... *claps*
    I also am crying.........

    BECAUSE I'M MISSING ONE OF THE GREATEST FUCKING SHOWS EVER!!!!!

    **note: I only live 2 hours from Philly**
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    nice poem.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    hey kevin! i like this :)
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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