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Gold Beetle

kevinbeetlekevinbeetle Posts: 358
edited December 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
She take my money when I'm in need
Yea she's a trifflin friend indeed
Oh she's a gold beetle way over town
That dig's on me

She takes my money
Now I aint sayin she a gold beetle. When I'm need
But she aint messin wit no broke beetlez
She takes my money
Now I aint sayin she a gold beetle. When I'm need
but she aint messin wit no broke beetlez
get down girl gone head get down. I gotta leave
get down girl gone head get down. I gotta leave
get down girl gone head get down. I gotta leave
get down girl gone head
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  • Floyd ManzeraFloyd Manzera Posts: 82
    beautiful.
    i am right there with you man.
    my woman steals from me and then tells me i am selfish.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • kevinbeetlekevinbeetle Posts: 358
    I was talking about my grandmother.
  • trappedinmyradiotrappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    trifflin'? or triflin'?
    kevinbeetle wrote:
    She take my money when I'm in need
    Yea she's a trifflin friend indeed
    Oh she's a gold beetle way over town
    That dig's on me

    She takes my money
    Now I aint sayin she a gold beetle. When I'm need
    But she aint messin wit no broke beetlez
    She takes my money
    Now I aint sayin she a gold beetle. When I'm need
    but she aint messin wit no broke beetlez
    get down girl gone head get down. I gotta leave
    get down girl gone head get down. I gotta leave
    get down girl gone head get down. I gotta leave
    get down girl gone head
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    kevinbeetle wrote:
    She take my money when I'm in need
    Yea she's a trifflin friend indeed
    Oh she's a gold beetle way over town
    That dig's on me

    She takes my money
    Now I aint sayin she a gold beetle. When I'm need
    But she aint messin wit no broke beetlez
    She takes my money
    Now I aint sayin she a gold beetle. When I'm need
    but she aint messin wit no broke beetlez
    get down girl gone head get down. I gotta leave
    get down girl gone head get down. I gotta leave
    get down girl gone head get down. I gotta leave
    get down girl gone head
    Is this meant to be rap?
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
  • kevinbeetlekevinbeetle Posts: 358
    trappedinmyradio wrote:
    trifflin'? or triflin'?
    Its trifflin, a word that means a lot to me.

    wayside, it was originally coined as haiku, but when I recite it out loud at the Nursing Home, its said in my Captain Kirk voice.
  • Floyd ManzeraFloyd Manzera Posts: 82
    this poem is talking to me in ways i would have never imagined.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • trappedinmyradiotrappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    kevinbeetle wrote:
    Its trifflin, a word that means a lot to me.

    wayside, it was originally coined as haiku, but when I recite it out loud at the Nursing Home, its said in my Captain Kirk voice.

    yeah, that's what i thought - it's not a word...
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • Floyd ManzeraFloyd Manzera Posts: 82
    trappedinmyradio wrote:
    yeah, that's what i thought - it's not a word...
    he made up the word and now it is.
    much like i have created my own vocabulary with words like:

    kik
    kedder
    kikle
    kiknettermeittootdove
    eyakayooids
    alordson

    these are all examples of my own kikspeak.
    now you try.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • trappedinmyradiotrappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    Floyd Manzera wrote:
    he made up the word and now it is.
    much like i have created my own vocabulary with words like:

    kik
    kedder
    kikle
    kiknettermeittootdove
    eyakayooids
    alordson

    these are all examples of my own kikspeak.
    now you try.

    dammit, have respect for language!
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • kevinbeetlekevinbeetle Posts: 358
    trappedinmyradio wrote:
    dammit, have respect for language!
    Unitl you come to the conclusion that the language that you speak is not quite the verbage' that Mr. Manzera and I have become acustomed to, you should have respect for the poetry.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    this is trifflin stuff......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    skiddish...skitso...trifflin...bonzo...gonzo are words that I would describe as gibberish.
    Nice poem Kevie.Now meet me for a beer and a shot of tequila at Seaside heights.

    Man I got so trashed at the borgata on friday.Partied like a rock star and was so mangled I think I forgot to pay the bill.Oh well.POWER TO THE PEOPLE!!!!
    CAll me Mrs. R. Hood.;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Boston LouBoston Lou Posts: 280
    beetle is as bad as can and he knows that he's the best
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