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Diner @ 11:00

kevinbeetlekevinbeetle Posts: 358
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
'Put it on my tab'
I told the young blonde bartender
As I smoked my last cigarette.
Barely able to walk,
Let alone drive my car.
'Where's the closest diner?'
I ask myself,
Thinking I'd answer back.
'We need some cheese fries,'
the stomach tells the brain.
Satisfaction complete.
Syncronicity forever.
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  • elephantrunkelephantrunk Posts: 24
    kevinbeetle wrote:
    'Put it on my tab'
    I told the young blonde bartender
    As I smoked my last cigarette.
    Barely able to walk,
    Let alone drive my car.
    'Where's the closest diner?'
    I ask myself,
    Thinking I'd answer back.
    'We need some cheese fries,'
    the stomach tells the brain.
    Satisfaction complete.
    Syncronicity forever.

    You are a nerd Beetle. But you still have my heart.
    I only wanted to be somebody. So fucking bad I came unglued.
    Here we are now face to face and I'm fucking you.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    i haven't had a decent cheesefry in years....

    years...


    god damn, i want some cheesefries,now
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    you get to smoke in bars in jersey?

    :p
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    PastaNazi wrote:
    i haven't had a decent cheesefry in years....

    years...


    god damn, i want some cheesefries,now
    Soft, warm and gooey
    Poutine in my mouth
    Curds and gravy are chewy
    Can't get this in the South

    I like to eat some
    On a cool autumn day
    For this shit I would come
    To Canada this May
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    great poem,..I loved the title
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    GOT TO LOVE OUR jERSEY DINERS,HEY kEVIE?:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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