Original song. Please critic the lyrics.

Say_My_Name

Swing Me Up, Swing Me Down.

Early, early in the morning
Caught a glimpse of what a dream could be
When the bubble burst I wished youll'd come out
Laid my head down tryied to sleep again

Smell of coffee doesn't turn me on
Like the smell of you wet skin
It reminds me of my childhood
Even though you weren't there before

Swing me up, up, up
Swing me down
Will you pick me up from the ground
If I fall will you lay with me
Or will you walk with someone else now

Swing me up, up, up
Swing me down
Will you pick me up from the ground
If I fall will you lay with me
Or will you walk with someone else now

I would like to live in that pimple
Just so I could always tay near you
Make you itch make you scratch all over
Make you notice that I am around

If I put myself in a box
Together with some cinnammon and nuts
Would you chose me over them
Or would you let me down in the mud

Swing me up, up, up
Swing me down
Will you pick me up from the ground
If I fall will you lay with me
Or will you walk with someone else now

Swing me up, up, up
Swing me down
Will you pick me up from the ground
If I fall will you lay with me
Or will you walk with someone else now