"Reluctant Acceptance."

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edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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“Reluctant Acceptance”

Feel the endless vibe
Scream until the time
Scream Until release of upset
Scream until you die

Show your utter shame
Display your given name
Display your life for all to observe
Display remains the same

Want for what’s to need
Crawl until you bleed
Crawl into your chest of freedom
Crawl into your creed

Live with what you chose
Your difference, it grows
Speak to they who understand you
Speak to all your foes

Fire!
Smoke is in the air
Smoke is in your gullet
Smoke is on your breath

Quiet!
Don’t convict yourself
Don’t is all we ever hear now
Don’t can go to hell

Trying to see where your life has gone wrong
Trying to bleed, the self-torture is on
Trying to find what remains of your ghost
Trying not to mind what disgusts you the most
Give in: Reluctant Acceptance

View what burns your eyes
Control your silent cries
Control the rage harboured within you
Control it or world dies

Imagine your death
Each one is last breath
Look at what your life has become
Look, there’s nothing left

Try not to react
Keep your cool intact
Keep your opinions in your prison
Keep your opinions trapped

The world you cannot change
Death you can’t arrange
Do not show what they don’t want to see
Do not show your rage

Fire!
Smoke is in the air
Smoke is in your gullet
Smoke is on your breath

Quiet!
Don’t convict yourself
Don’t is all we ever hear now
Don’t can go to hell

Trying to see where your life has gone wrong
Trying to bleed, the self-torture is on
Trying to find what remains of your ghost
Trying not to mind what disgusts you the most
Give in: Reluctant Acceptance
I wish, I wish, I wish, I wish. I guess it never stops...
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Comments

  • that's interesting.
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    I had mixed feelings while reading this one...

    On the one hand I thought I saw an individual trying to compromise their own individuality and their own spirit just to fit in.. and hating themselves for it.

    On the other hand, I saw a Fox Reality Series TV show.

    Which is pretty close to the same thing.

    I liked it... but I'm not sure that I know why.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • i dont understand it, but it was well written..
  • Reminds me of "Breadfan" by Metallica. Isn't that a cover?
  • Yes. "Breadfan" by Metallica is a cover.

    The lyrics are mainly about turning a blind eye to something you know is wrong. There are a few other hidden meanings in there. But the idea of "putting up" something that you know is wrong is the main topic. It is written sarcastically...
    I wish, I wish, I wish, I wish. I guess it never stops...
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    awesome

    im not sure im in a poetry state thought as much as
    i feel political or at least trying to say something
    similiar to what jesus said which is all over your awesome
    poem , no hell

    why do we need to be powerful
    why do we need to have seperation
    why can't we open our borders
    why can't we get water where water is needed

    why is it accepted this army
    why is it obnoxious to fight
    why do i feel so responsible now
    when later i will laugh and feel free


    like iggy pop says i never know it all


    tim sucks
    convicted
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