a new old song

sevensins

i wrote this song a while ago.Think i was ten,i think its pretty good for a ten year old.Anyway i think ill update the lyrics in a while.

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Seven
" Burning Bridges"

take all that wasnt yours
forget the man you were before
cant stop whats already begun
when the fire starts this isnt fun

Can you feel
Can you wake -- chorus
Not your falt
my mistake

take the time to hurry up
be all that i could be
lake has gone to another place
been so long since i've seen my face

-chorus-

i've all thats on my plate
so be hear when i'm not
swim to me dissapere
as time passes i'm still hear

-chorus-

if i took what was given to me
could i be what was never free
i can fall
i cant wake
gave it up for another mistake

bambi girl

you wrote that when you were ten? thats damn good for a ten yr old! i think the chorus is ace.

sevensins

i traced down the original copy, wrote it when i was 11-12 so it wasnt that
long ago( im 15 )

bambi girl

okay, well its really good for an 11-12 year old. i can only write poetry when im really emotional-which tends to be about once every month (lol) and then im not in the mood to write anyway.

sevensins

i usually let my emotions build before i write. i find then i can understand what im feeling beter.

sevensins

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BhagavadGita

Originally posted by sevensins
i usually let my emotions build before i write. i find then i can understand what im feeling beter.

Exodus

again, cutos on the work...
and im assuming thats how "cutos" is spelled..(coo-tOs)

little advice...(if u wanna hear)
don't feel like you have to rhyme...in fact you might even write better stuff not rhyming....but dont try to not rhyme either...just write what comes out first, no matter how it sounds, and piece it all together later. it doesnt have to come out perfect on the first go....

anyway....keep it up

sevensins

for the record this is kinda old, you should probobly check out more resent stuff to see were i'm at........unless i suck now....

Sound

great Seven

i could hear the melody in my head.

hope you made one for it

sevensins

i did, it's not gunna be used on an album but theres always live.