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Punk Poetry

sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
"rambleings of a dangerous mind"

The canabalistic qualities of the separate seasons to feed upon themselves to feed upon another, looking for a cure, looking for more, more, feed, greed, pain, stain themselves with there own blood, waiting for a cure

The ozone layer's evaporating like the shepard in the storys I've been told but have forgotten, I seek new storys, new idols, false idols to worship until they burry me as well under my own false hope for humanity

I think were better off, lifeless inside our own womb, enclosed from there word, maby the days of old and young will come together to form a new type of fiction or some type of remorse over the false pretences our society is built upon, upon, a lawn, green green grass, blowing......wet.....







I wonder what today will bring....a dream?, a dream would be nice, head lice, a wife......Will you marry me? No? that's ok.....we'll pay, they'll pay, I'll staty the night


Never mind your morals and starderds of meashuring sucsess before you've acheaved anything in your life, love has been lost, were is love? Do you know?
Does anyone know?
Did I step on it and not notice? Did the polution fill it's lungs?
no....it lives, in the trees we cut with no remorse or idea of what we have done.......

abort christ
abort love
lost hope resides inside a bucket of _______
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  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    hahahahahahahahahah no one likes :(
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Originally posted by sevensins
    hahahahahahahahahah no one likes :(
    Lord, you were born a ramblin' man,
    Tryin' to make a livin' and doin' the best you can.

    Ramble on like insects inside a snowman's head
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    yep, well u may not like it but i do so there :P
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Never said I didn't like it so :p back atchya.
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    well u still havent said if u did......
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    The mayor of christmas town is waiting with a fish hook,
    spining it ever so slowly around his finger.....he graps you with his coil, and contiues to boil you in the pot....burn

    you twitch and squirm to escape but slowly you relax in the comfort of your pending doom, he baists you in his semen, you drink every drop with a slight grin, slowly it begins to turn to asid inside you, moving down your body with such force as a train into you chimeny, "Santa Clause is hear" he says as he beats you with the force of something out of our relm of countious thought, "I am the ewe, and you are christ" you repie sobbing as the comfort leaves you, " heard me out from these walls, protect me from the wolf".

    The man who is no longer mayor replies to your face with a strike, leaving your nose to bleed into the pot, your comfort is gone forever now.....your inocence taken all at one time, as he brings 8 other men, they hold you down and blindfold you, leaveing your nose to bleed into the mask, "Santa Clause is hear, be ready for his raindeer", as he called off there names each gives you a strike, and grabs you as you boil and let go of your life, it go's on for hours or so it seems, until you feel only one pair of hands pick you up, rocking you back and forth, "I'll protect you, Daddys hear.........................merry christmas baby"
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

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  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    you are the little one faceing a giant,
    cast your stones opon the left side of his brain,
    destroy logic in the name of love,
    it has no place in this bed.

    I watch objectivly as the angles fly from your brain while you sleep,
    killing themselves above us with swift cut to there wrists,
    bleeding onto me.

    Watch me as I silence them,
    and bring the winds of change in there place,
    the slight breez blows against our ear drums,
    forces us into a deep, relaxed, peaceful sleep
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    Originally posted by sevensins
    well u still havent said if u did......


    seven, i like the first one very much...
    ever hear that song Shaving Cream?

    lemme find the words...



    on to the next :)
    ~all is full of love~
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    here they are...


    I have a sad story to tell you.
    It may hurt your feelings a bit.
    last night, when I walked in my bathroom,
    I stepped in a pile of...
    Shaving cream, be nice and clean!
    Shave every day, and you'll always look keen.

    I think I'll break up with my girlfriend.
    Her antics are queer, I'll admit.
    Each time I say "Darling, I love you,"
    She tells me that I'm full of...
    Shaving cream, be nice and clean!
    Shave every day, and you'll always look keen.

    A baby fell out of the window.
    You'd think that her head would be split.
    But good luck was with her that morning.
    She fell in a barrel of...
    Shaving cream, be nice and clean!
    Shave every day, and you'll always look keen.

    When I was in France with the Army,
    One day I looked into my kit.
    I thought I would find me a sandwich,
    But the darn thing was loaded with...
    Shaving cream, be nice and clean!
    Shave every day, and you'll always look keen.

    And now, folks, my story is ended.
    I think it is time I should quit.
    If any of you feel offended,
    Stick your head in a barrel of...
    Shaving cream, be nice and clean!
    Shave every day, and you'll always look keen
    ~all is full of love~
  • Ok2GoOk2Go Posts: 102
    Originally posted by sevensins
    you are the little one faceing a giant,
    cast your stones opon the left side of his brain,
    destroy logic in the name of love,
    it has no place in this bed.

    I watch objectivly as the angles fly from your brain while you sleep,
    killing themselves above us with swift cut to there wrists,
    bleeding onto me.

    Watch me as I silence them,
    and bring the winds of change in there place,
    the slight breez blows against our ear drums,
    forces us into a deep, relaxed, peaceful sleep

    slept all day,
    more have escaped.
    winds of whoa
    "and then, one Thursday, nearly two thousand years after one man had been nailed to a tree for saying how great it would be to be nice to people for a change, a girl sitting on her own in a small cafe in Rickmansworth suddenly realized what it was that had been going wrong in the world all this time, and she finally knew how the world could be made a good and happy place. This time it was right and no one had to get nailed to anything. Sadly, before she could get to a phone to tell anyone about it, a terrible stupid catastrophe occurred, and the idea was lost forever."

    Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    I liked your ramblings :)
    but I particularly liked your poem about the escaping angels escape from the sleeping person, comitting suicide
    I should probably have quoted the poem so you could know what the heck i was talking about :D
    anyway, good stuff


    Buru.
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    your feet only hurt as much as the floor you walk on,
    yet, you only wish to thank the sky........
    the pills your refused will find refuge in your throught, burning slightly on the way
    D
    O
    W
    N

    ask yourself 20 questions wile you travel with them,
    start with "why?" end with "how?", fill in the inbettween lines with an eraser,
    If your still feeling down when you reach the bottom, all will make sence, for how can anything going down bring you up?
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    Oh let the piano play,
    play me a tune,
    one that moves me out the door,
    one that can make the water in my head drain from my eyes,
    gree tears from the third eye, green like the rain should be when it reaches the sun

    Take me up higher, make it louer, push me harder now I'm breaking, relentless background subliminal messaging, "LOVE<LOVE<LOVE"
    put the tears back to the ground from whenc they came,
    let me play,
    just once,
    you never let anyone touch those keys, pearly white in their exterior,
    oh how they move me!
    take me,
    let me play with you,

    You wont, you play alone, all alone with your hand hovering majesticly over the keys,
    waiting for the right time to play THAT note, the last note,
    let me play it for you, just press down on that key,
    just........DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I want to play!
    I want to play!

    play alone
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • mqouuiseetmqouuiseet Posts: 35
    much like love
    hope cannot be lost..
    hope gave birth to me
    hope keeps us strong
    we both need her
    when all is lost
    hope refills yourlife withdreams
    hope is your secret life
    hope was a wonderful wife
    hope keeps me alive
    she breathes life into me everyday
    she can control my emotions
    and i let her
    she's hope
    she's never been bad
    she's proven that to me
    hope tells me to ask for what i want
    hope's made it work every time
    hope keeps a lump in my throat
    it's her place
    that's how it should be
    she's part of me
    i'm half of her
    i love hope with all my soul
    she's everything
  • 2btheluvof1trueheart2btheluvof1trueheart Posts: 12
    Originally posted by mqouuiseet
    much like love
    hope cannot be lost..

    hope tells me to ask for what i want
    hope's made it work every time
    hope keeps a lump in my throat
    it's her place
    that's how it should be
    she's part of me
    i'm half of her
    i love hope with all my soul
    she's everything

    beautiful

    if only hope could make it so.
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    Originally posted by 2btheluvof1trueheart
    beautiful

    if only hope could make it so.

    i agree...........not shur it qualifys as "punk poetry".........but i will let this one slide.........jk
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
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