burry me in shit

sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
shes my bowl of oranges
the ones next to the apple
but she peels me, and leaves my exposed to the silence
the cold wind informs me of her hate
while the warm sun baths me in her love
i drive in my lane, wile she drives on the line
and rams me off the road
I tell her i love her
and she leaves me crusified to a tree
bleeding nakedly into the stream she runs along

but she exclames "i love you!"
and wispers the same
the universe expands growing with our love
but she forms her hole in the center, pulls everything down
she is sin, but she's my sin

i give myself to her
and she keeps me in her pocket
takeing me out now and then to read some poetic verse
and cry
cry me out

Come, Come to me
cuz i already came to you
or just hate me
hate me like you want to
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  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    she does
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • Originally posted by Sound
    she does

    sometimes i'm not so sure
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    yellow touches her little yellow forefinger to her little yellow chin and thinks....

    blue???


    more like, black...


    hmmm....



    honestly, seven...


    it is beautiful to actually watch your poetry grow... it's like a daffodil that's been underground since last summer... the shoots have broken ground... now all we need's a little rain... (not yellow, btw... gross) and soon you will become some little flower :)



    these images are fierce and deep...

    "bleeding nakedly into the stream she runs along"....

    and

    "but she peels me, and leaves my exposed to the silence "...






    i dunno, seven... i feel for this pain
    It's all yellow.


  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    she does
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • I agree with Yellow and I feel the pain in this piece.

    May good things come to you sevesins! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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