sevensins' seven sins

sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
rock & fukin' roll!!!!


The Radio killers
"Seven Sins"
I think I got thetime
how bought another day
I need to tast your lime
oh wont ya' sin for me
-oh wont ya sin for me, LOVE
oh wont ya' sin for me
oh wont ya' sin for me, LOVE
oh wont ya' sin for me-
I'll put you on display
I want to see you smirk
I'll make you want to stay
and forget about work
I want another bite
ya' need to set me free
Come on and start the fight
oh wont ya sin for me
-oh wont ya sin for me, LOVE
oh wont ya sin for me
oh wont ya sin for me, LOVE
oh wont ya sin for me-
~ oh wont ya sin for, oh wont ya sin for, oh wont ya sin for, oh wont ya sin for, oh wont a sin for me~
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  • what? the first non sad song i write and no one likes it!
    fine I'll only write when I'm on the brink of suiside! :)
  • Sorry I missed this one! And you've come to the right place if you're looking for sinners! ;)

    I need to taste your lime -- nice! (reminds me of - squeeze my lemon, 'til the juice runs down my leg - Led Zepplin) :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • wow a Zepplin comparison........in the words of Garth, "I'm not worthy!!"
  • Sounds (?) punk to me. Rapid fire! Ratta tat tat!
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  • this song sucks....... i think after this you should quit. i lloked up to you.... you make me hate you.
    the fear lies deep inside and its name is love
  • Originally posted by Pogonum7
    this song sucks....... i think after this you should quit. i lloked up to you.... you make me hate you.

    Oooo! Constructive criticism! That's what's missing here at the Poetry Hut!

    Thanks for stoppin by and offering your opinion, sage of poetry.
    • 98 Pgh
    • 00 Pgh
    • 03 Pgh|Philly|PSU|Camden 1+2|Hershey
    • 04 Boston 1|Reading
    • 05 Philly
    • 06 Camden 1+2|Pgh
    • 08 Camden 1+2|Hartford|Mansfield 2
    • 09 Philly 1 [EV]|Toronto|Spectrum 1-4
    • 10 Cleveland|Buffalo
    • 11 Philly [EV]|PJ20
    • 12 Philly
    • 13 London|Pgh|Buff|Philly 1+2|Balt
    • 14 Cincy|StL
    • 16 Philly 1+2|Philly 2 [TotD]
    • 18 Boston 1+2
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Sigh, pogonum (which is munogop backwards), it's punk baby. There isn't necessarily supposed to be the world's answers in it, it's supposed to be release and seven always does that well and with honesty and that is why it's so good. He's not lying to anyone. He's literally vomiting forth his feelings in a 4:3 rhythm and letting you have at 11.

    love it.

    Seven, kick ass.

    Pogonum, see ya.


    seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Originally posted by sevensins
    wow a Zepplin comparison........in the words of Garth, "I'm not worthy!!"

    Oh no! :o It's been said. Therefore, YOU ARE WORTHY, YOU ARE WORTHY! Deal with it! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Originally posted by Pogonum7
    this song sucks....... i think after this you should quit. i lloked up to you.... you make me hate you.

    Dont make me call your mom!!
    I'll get her on your ass like......like.....me and that 'cheese in a can' stuff........you know what i'm saying.
    I should post those pics of you in a dress!!

    And you know you got a solo in this one :)
  • Originally posted by CranMalReign
    Oooo! Constructive criticism! That's what's missing here at the Poetry Hut!

    Thanks for stoppin by and offering your opinion, sage of poetry.

    ha! he's just kidding, he's in the band that plays this song.
    Seta always gave constructive critesisem when I asked.
  • Originally posted by setaside2
    Sigh, pogonum (which is munogop backwards), it's punk baby. There isn't necessarily supposed to be the world's answers in it, it's supposed to be release and seven always does that well and with honesty and that is why it's so good. He's not lying to anyone. He's literally vomiting forth his feelings in a 4:3 rhythm and letting you have at 11.

    love it.

    Seven, kick ass.

    Pogonum, see ya.


    seta

    thank you seta.


























    it's about sex.....just so theres no confution.
  • i of course was just kidding and meant nothing by it










    and seven does rule!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    the fear lies deep inside and its name is love
  • Originally posted by Pogonum7
    i of course was just kidding and meant nothing by it










    and seven does rule!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    no i dont


































    you know that little boy.
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