i dont care

sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
free my heaven from this box of sadness.
my love exists in the village of my body and soul do to the lack of lack ing i apeare to have stoped careing about this, i dont care, i dont care, i dont care, i dont care, i dont care maby i should..........i wanted to see you tonight...but i stand alone hear, spinning spiretless circles of ninexistent extacy and exess of eXess. when are you comeing home?
you said you were......didnt you?
didnt he love you? he didnt know the horrors of reaching his arm out




i cant finnish this, i dont care, i dont care, i wont care i wont i wont i wont



















finnish me off baby......
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  • jboelhowjboelhow Posts: 170
    Originally posted by sevensins
    free my heaven from this box of sadness.
    my love exists in the village of my body and soul do to the lack of lack ing i apeare to have stoped careing about this, i dont care, i dont care, i dont care, i dont care, i dont care maby i should..........i wanted to see you tonight...but i stand alone hear, spinning spiretless circles of ninexistent extacy and exess of eXess. when are you comeing home?
    you said you were......didnt you?
    didnt he love you? he didnt know the horrors of reaching his arm out




    i cant finnish this, i dont care, i dont care, i wont care i wont i wont i wont



















    finnish me off baby......

    An interesting "stream of consciences" poem. I like the voice that is present. The confusion between reality and our emontions is express. On a poetic side I don't get the "finnish" last line. It seems to end with the "i can't" line.
    Live the life you dream

    "Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
    So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    {sevensins}
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