i love you, just kidding

sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
those words you spoke to me were better off unsaid,
a reminder of the vain you cut, it killed inside my dead
rotten wound wound tightly round my arm, like a badge of honor
i'm a vetren of pain, and i will surcome to your curcumsition
be blinded by the flame as it ignights the forest from wich love was built

build me a staition, a house of cards to live in till my sactiary opens
the bus claimed my ticket a fake, and the trains been closed for years
i have no were to go, can i spend the night?

weres the kid with the chemicals?, i need a night away from me
come lie with me, get high with me, fly by with me, run rampid through the already run down reins

i stole a bike for you, will you teach me to ride it?
i wanted a mother, i wanted a father, brother, sister, cat, dog, white picket fence..........i wanted a lover, to love me, to love me, to love, me

take a walk with me, i'm to scared to walk alone
i need protection from protecting you, you're not mine to protect
you never really were i gess, at best a fling, a one month stand
i love you, i'm kidding
i love you, i'm kidding
i love you, i'm kidding
i loved you, not winning

if you'll just listen a little longer, i'll get out all i need to say
you played games with my heat, stepped on my heart
then gave the most inocent smile........"sorry, happienes just isnt for you"
for christ sake, i'm a fucking human being with thoughts and feelings, blood, i have blood to! i can cut like you i cant make the world love me the way you do, i'm just a check on the wall, an unretured call, a scetch on your dresser, a poem written to you, for you, for you for you, FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHY CANT ONE SMILE LAST ON MY FACE FOR A MOMENT IN TIME A SLIP IN THE ROAD AND I'M BACK IN LAST PLACE GIVE ME A SIGHN, TAKE ME HOME,
LOVE ME
LOVE ME
LOVE ME
LOVE ME!!!!!!!!!
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  • bambi girlbambi girl Posts: 406
    hey seven, i'd like to tell you that i really like this, as i do....but, it's your raw emotions and you dont need someone telling you that it's good...


    i hope you're okay, PM me sometime soon and lemme know how you are yeah?


    :)
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    i always like hearing if you like my garbage. i will PM you as soon as i can muster up the energy.


    :)
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    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
  • bambi girlbambi girl Posts: 406
    Originally posted by sevensins
    i always like hearing if you like my garbage. i will PM you as soon as i can muster up the energy.


    :)


    you better...or else.
  • this reminds me a lot of black

    kinda croscendoes at the end too :D

    i like it
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  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    Originally posted by Pearl Jam and toast
    this reminds me a lot of black

    kinda croscendoes at the end too :D

    i like it

    thank you, it felt damn good to write. i was hurting alot last night. got a message from an ex...........sucked
  • Spot In The SkySpot In The Sky Posts: 1,175
    good stuff bro- i read it twice
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  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    Originally posted by Spot In The Sky
    good stuff bro- i read it twice
    thanks, i just read it for the first time......hmmmm, i like it
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    hugs to you, sir

    sorry bout all the blood


    this line:

    come lie with me, get high with me, fly by with me, run rampid through the already run down reins


    rocks, btw



    ~me
  • i love you, i'm kidding...

    sounds like my life too.

    i like how you wrote this.
    "Life is a wonderful thing - don't let anyone keep you from enjoying it."
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    ...thank you for a funk-ay time...

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  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    Originally posted by rise above
    i love you, i'm kidding...

    sounds like my life too.

    i like how you wrote this.

    thanks, i am making it into a song. and i must say its becoming my favoret song:0
    well thanks again, i'm hungry.....damn i wish i had some food. i need a bite to eat..........or two.........i'm just rambleing now.....off i go


    thanks
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    yes i like the music. .......its a good song now........i'll shut up now
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    One thing I never understood was how does somebody tell you how much they love you and then do a 180 on you the next day.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    Originally posted by violet ray
    One thing I never understood was how does somebody tell you how much they love you and then do a 180 on you the next day.

    i got a message from her saying "i miss you, i want to get back together......just kidding".............ahhh relationships, fun fun fun
  • suedesuede Posts: 247
    hey man, i was just singing "I Love you...I'm kidding" in my head...and remembered that you wrote a poem like that. it's weird. it was the only part i could hear...but you've already written it. damn.
  • PaulJamPaulJam Posts: 163
    Originally posted by sevensins
    i got a message from her saying "i miss you, i want to get back together......just kidding".............ahhh relationships, fun fun fun

    I'd be happy if an ex sent me that. It'd make me realise how pathetic they are.
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    played the song in front of her......surreal experience. she left crying and i felt bad.......
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