I fucked up V-day

sevensins

"black and white french film"

Do you have another glass?
I could really use a drink
I've been walking down your street for many days
I have no destanation, it's not clear to me now, but I'll get their when i get their, even if i dont know how

Could i share a smoke with you?
I've been standing hear all night
right beside a bench, railroad station, blinking light
I havent got a ticket, maby you could have a spare, Cuz I'm lookin' and I'm lookin', but no one seems to care

Could you refrain from the laughter, and your frigid stares, their a man dieing hear, well no one really cares, the media is watching, two lovers finally kiss
and paying them there rubys, but they wont make the list, I havent got a flower, but I hope that she wont care, Cuz if nothin is and nothing is, then were never really their

Squirrel

wow...this is a great poem...tells a sad lonely story...

but beautifully worded...reminds me of the atmosphere of a movie..like, i could really picture a dark shady street...and how this person must feel...awesome!

(btw..no offence but i think you mixed up their and there)

sevensins

i do that all the time......the question is "is it intentional?"



hmmmmmmmmm, could be......probly not




thank for compomt.....(intentional?)

Squirrel

Originally posted by sevensins
i do that all the time......the question is "is it intentional?"



hmmmmmmmmm, could be......probly not




thank for compomt.....(intentional?)

er..well..i thought about it being intentional as well..but then wasn't too sure so i put it in brackets

what's compomt??

tenaciousA

i agree...
this is a lovely little thing...

thank you, seven

coleen

you never fail to astonish me seven.

the progression i've been blessed to witness in your work since your very first post here, makes me smile.

i can't imagine how you'll top this one - my very favorite so far - but i've got a feeling that somehow you will.

can't wait.

sevensins

it's offictially a song now