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Depocote Diaphram

sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
edited June 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
read between, the lines, that you see
and you'll see, that flowers, aren't so pretty
take off, the blindfold, covers your sleep
and weep, and weep

mmm mmm.....................

calm down! (x 4)

Rearange, the garments, litter your room
take out, your anger, along with your broom
clean off, your body, time to feel
freezing, freezing

mmm mmm.............


calm Down! (x8)

mmm mmm.............
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :) Nice to see you out and about there, sevensins!

    Mmmmmm, nice lyrics! :)

    You take care!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Originally posted by sevensins
    read between, the lines, that you see
    and you'll see, that flowers, aren't so pretty
    take off, the blindfold, covers your sleep
    and weep, and weep

    mmm mmm.....................

    calm down! (x 4)

    Rearange, the garments, litter your room
    take out, your anger, along with your broom
    clean off, your body, time to feel
    freezing, freezing

    mmm mmm.............


    calm Down! (x8)

    mmm mmm.............



    dang, bubba... where you been? missed you :)
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    i've been on a island with jesus and bob marley
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    jesus and bob marley? wow, I hope you brought snickers, cokes and Funyuns...

    :D
    It's all yellow.


  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    we had weed, pringles and granola. And i got stung by a jellyfish and jesus had to pee on me to heal me
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    was it Yellow?




    :D
    It's all yellow.


  • bambi girlbambi girl Posts: 406
    seven :) oh its good to read some of your work again...


    i like it


    "and you'll see, that flowers, arn't so pretty"


    *ponders that thought and walks away...*
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    jesus sure likes water
    all that time in the desert
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    and you'll see, that flowers, aren't so pretty


    i agree, very good line.
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    actialy the line is my flowers arent so pretty, wich do u like better?
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    i think "flowers arent so pretty" not "my flowers arent so pretty"

    cuz i took it to mean, a pretty flower, in its ripe, beautiful stage, in contrast to a dead flower

    kind of like a tortured prisoner in comparison to someone who lives in the US, with all our luxuries, know what i mean? someone who looks pampered compared to someone who has nothing....

    that is what i took it to mean
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    that flowers OR my flowers...

    i think either could be used, but i think i like "that flowers" more... makes for a deeper thing, a deeper more transcendent thing...

    because we all have things that are not so pretty about us, the irony in that becomes that sometimes we get lucky and people love the ugly, too...

    i think it's what everyone wants, really

    to be able to hang loose and not be scared?
  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    amen pasta---
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    Originally posted by sevensins
    read between, the lines, that you see
    and you'll see, that flowers, aren't so pretty
    take off, the blindfold, covers your sleep
    and weep, and weep

    mmm mmm.....................

    calm down! (x 4)

    Rearange, the garments, litter your room
    take out, your anger, along with your broom
    clean off, your body, time to feel
    freezing, freezing

    mmm mmm.............


    calm Down! (x8)

    mmm mmm.............

    well it was written to someone i love, and i wanted her to calm down from her manic mentality, but that line refured to a underlinng fear i had about her stoping her mania and loosing her need and want for me, and relising i'm not so amazing, just a stepping stone in her life, a flower that never was pretty
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    should that occur, my dear seven, then you must know the mania has not, in fact, ended... that it has only changed into another suit of clothes...

    you're fucking gorgeous
    you make all the flowers jealous


    i know this fear, first hand...

    05/19/04
    Are we ready, Love?
    To step outside ourselves again?

    The lifting up…
    The forgiveness…
    the Triple A clean clean sweep
    that the best band-aid in the world can’t compete with.
    The healed don’t kiss the doctor
    The soccer kids don’t stay side-lined
    They go back to play or on about their way
    And the saints have shiny wings and broken hearts to show the Lord.
    Hushing squeaky greaseless wheels.


    the saints have shiny wings to show the lord, you hear?

    you will know love
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    thanks but you obviously blind
    no beauty hear
    but thank you, and i really like that poem
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
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