The Last Act

sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Staged conversations are passing me by
as I watch from a window downtown
A busy bus stop just two kids on the block
and we chip off our shoulders in play

A busy red light stops the traffic at night,
two minuets till I’m heading home
A man with a megaphone screams at the walls
I’m not taking his calls I am done

-I’ll make a break for a, gental uproar
Too vague to be sure, I wanted it more-

I was spinning the truth in a big empty booth
ordering drinks for two
I turned in my elegance for a disease,
And cast out the sinner at bay

I’m doing just fine with a bottle of wine
as they send off their soldiers in hate
A girl with an overcast casts her spells
I’m am taking my rest from a gun

-I’ll make a break for a, gental uproar
Too vague to be sure, I wanted it more-
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Comments

  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Congratulations...
    I like it.
    Sounds like my Night out tonight.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • I'll keep my words short and to the point. These are bloody great lyrics for a song. I'm serious. Well done, man.
  • I just had a thought. These arelyrics to a song, from your demo! Of course, silly me.
  • I dig. Apparently "I dig" is too short of a reply to send as is. But torepeat, I dig. I'vee been there, and I go back frquently.
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    thanks forthe comments. Yes these are on my demo, but.....you know when you write a song and you really like it, and then you start to tweak it a little and suddently its totaly diferent and you hate the orginal? thats what happened here. So I updated the lyrics to better end the story to the album.
    Glad ya'll like em:)
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