naked in the arms of sleepless-ness

sevensins
sevensins Posts: 887
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The noise is quiet, just above a wisper
our breaths amplified by the others ear
a pale shadow of your smile crosses my eyes,
as the movement of your hips discards my restrant
this air moves like fingertips over my contracting body
i'm shaking as we cross each line,
now and then i try to chatch my breath,
but i loose it whenever i open my eyes
your hands find my own, come together in this bed
my lips graze yours lighty, i feel your need in those eyes
push into you once more, and feel the walls contract
naked we come together with eyes locked as one.
kind pleasure inside each unblinked glance
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  • Anna_falk
    Anna_falk Posts: 114
    I feel the intimacy ;)

    ( Have you edited your poem ?? )
    To worry about tomorrow doesn't make it easier,
    it only makes today worse.
  • sevensins
    sevensins Posts: 887
    Anna_falk wrote:
    I feel the intimacy ;)

    ( Have you edited your poem ?? )
    just a line i desided to change cuz i'm like that. and yes, very intement....gotta love love right?
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • Anna_falk
    Anna_falk Posts: 114
    Yes, gotta love love ;)
    To worry about tomorrow doesn't make it easier,
    it only makes today worse.
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    dang!

    i really like the discarded restraint, seven

    very nice :)
  • MOON LOVE
    MOON LOVE Posts: 35
    Beautiful...an experience like that is priceless....lucky you!!
  • Nothingbetter
    Nothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    Very intimate and sexy. It paints a beautiful picture of love.
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  • pearlmutt
    pearlmutt Posts: 392
    wow

    (why can't we just say wow?)

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