Sarah

sevensins

doing some stream stuff, this is what came out of the name sarah.

These colors bleached pour new over the milddew of her front step
the taste of god and angels in the breeze
she grabs his alkel falls to her kneese
hair washed in silk soft velvet
she washes his dirty feet "make me clean again?"

The roses white with red made the cellar doors open
taken back there homes the poeple sang
cheering onto obliviion.....

She loves him....she loves him

This posetion, a holy conseption peels the truth away
She begs for her saviors return
A master of domenice with a careing smile
minipulation in the air of his breath
she washes his dirty souls, "make me feel again?"

Sarh hides, from sinfull memory
who are you? Who are you?

FinsburyParkCarrots

This posetion, a holy conseption peels the truth away
She begs for her saviors return
A master of domenice with a careing smile
minipulation in the air of his breath
she washes his dirty souls, "make me feel again?"


I like the tension here between psychosexual observation and interplay, and religious elements ("her savors return"; "washes his dirty souls"). That's clever work.

eden

sevensins wrote:

doing some stream stuff, this is what came out of the name sarah.

These colors bleached pour new over the milddew of her front step
the taste of god and angels in the breeze
she grabs his alkel falls to her kneese
hair washed in silk soft velvet
she washes his dirty feet "make me clean again?"

The roses white with red made the cellar doors open
taken back there homes the poeple sang
cheering onto obliviion.....

She loves him....she loves him

This posetion, a holy conseption peels the truth away
She begs for her saviors return
A master of domenice with a careing smile
minipulation in the air of his breath
she washes his dirty souls, "make me feel again?"

Sarh hides, from sinfull memory
who are you? Who are you?

Very thought provoking.
I also love your Corgan sig! No truer words ever spoken..

sevensins

FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:

This posetion, a holy conseption peels the truth away
She begs for her saviors return
A master of domenice with a careing smile
minipulation in the air of his breath
she washes his dirty souls, "make me feel again?"


I like the tension here between psychosexual observation and interplay, and religious elements ("her savors return"; "washes his dirty souls"). That's clever work.

Wow, someone sounds smart. Hit the nail on the head there, and made me look good....niiiice lol

eden wrote:

Very thought provoking.
I also love your Corgan sig! No truer words ever spoken...

thanks for reading, and corgans full of great quotes like....

" Interviewer: "You've lost all your hair, are you undergoing chemo therapy?"
Billy: "Do you understand the words fuck off?" "

cartoonnightmare

sevensins wrote:

A master of domenice with a careing smile

good line..

sevensins

cartoonnightmare wrote:

good line..

thank you..
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Ms. Haiku

It reminds me of the story of Mary Magdelene, so I was confused a little, but it inspired me to write about the Sarah in my life.


A 3-year old firecracker
hair could turn a damp leaf
on fire in Autumn.
No off button.
The newest "big sister"
on the block;
(Would take on a priest if
he holds little sis wrong.)

Dancing girl twirling girl
feels wind as her dance partner;
We could feel electricty
if only we could catch her.

cartoonnightmare

Bibliobella wrote:

It reminds me of the story of Mary Magdelene, so I was confused a little, but it inspired me to write about the Sarah in my life.


A 3-year old firecracker
hair could turn a damp leaf
on fire in Autumn.
No off button.
The newest "big sister"
on the block;
(Would take on a priest if
he holds little sis wrong.)

Dancing girl twirling girl
feels wind as her dance partner;
We could feel electricty
if only we could catch her.

..i know this is someone else's thread, but just wanted to say -- i really like your poem bibliobella. thank you for sharing it.