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sevensins

I am as she says, busy breaking records
longest time spent on the self, waiting to be touched
You have, as i've said, the sadest eyes I've seen
longest time spent on kneese, praying to be touched
the ageless arogence, we hold on to
the smallest crusifice
you'll plege you too

I am, as she says, the greatest kisser ever breathed
kindest press between a lip and a tounge
She has, as I've said, the prettyest lies I've ever beleved
foolish hope is set inside, funny how pasion never hides
the timelesness of inocence, we've all but let go
the smallest purity
shames you and me
we were never ment to be, this way

Being Enlightened

"I am, as she says, the greatest kisser ever breathed
kindest press between a lip and a tounge" - WOW!

You have a way with words, sir sevensins! I really enjoyed "Sarah" as well.

Ali

sevensins wrote:

I am as she says, busy breaking records
longest time spent on the self, waiting to be touched
You have, as i've said, the sadest eyes I've seen
longest time spent on kneese, praying to be touched
the ageless arogence, we hold on to
the smallest crusifice
you'll plege you too

I am, as she says, the greatest kisser ever breathed
kindest press between a lip and a tounge
She has, as I've said, the prettyest lies I've ever beleved
foolish hope is set inside, funny how pasion never hides
the timelesness of inocence, we've all but let go
the smallest purity
shames you and me
we were never ment to be, this way

Overall...a very romantic and sorrowfilled piece capturing many of my former relationships......nice:;)

olderman

sevensins wrote:

I am as she says, busy breaking records
longest time spent on the self, waiting to be touched
You have, as i've said, the sadest eyes I've seen
longest time spent on kneese, praying to be touched
the ageless arogence, we hold on to
the smallest crusifice
you'll plege you too

I am, as she says, the greatest kisser ever breathed
kindest press between a lip and a tounge
She has, as I've said, the prettyest lies I've ever beleved
foolish hope is set inside, funny how pasion never hides
the timelesness of inocence, we've all but let go
the smallest purity
shames you and me
we were never ment to be, this way

she told me that she would miss that about me,
and yet she still moved on..

i was young,
she was young,
yet she made the first move toward being an adult

what sadness she was

thanks for the poem sevensins

ISN

sevensins, I like this a lot......it's catchy.....and turbulent

DopeBeastie

i just think you're an amazing poet.
the way you twist 'em out
it's so pure

nicely done, m'dear


Rachel

sevensins

PastaNazi wrote:

i just think you're an amazing poet.
the way you twist 'em out
it's so pure

nicely done, m'dear


Rachel

thanks love