cry on cue

sevensins

Won’t you teach me to cry on cue?
Like all those singers do
Feel the scrutiny of the sound
As a lire to be crowned

Wont the just define my means
When nothings as it seems
When the child raises hands against his fathers face
When the lover raises question of loves grace

Will you teach me to dance?
Like those children do
With no fear in there eye, of how there hearts will one day die.
When they find that birthdays are a step closer to the end

How do you speak when your heart is just too weak?
When your days are just too bleak
When each hour is a weak, in your minds eye

Won’t the clock halt a breath, and stop a thousand deaths
With its hands it wipes away my hopes,
For a phone call from a god, for a day were I can breath, for a solitary sanity I’ve been hoping to achieve

Being Enlightened

I know folks get on ya about your spelling but you do write some beautiful poemsongs! Some WOW poemsongs! I personally think this is one of them.

"Will you teach me to dance?
Like those children do
With no fear in there eye, of how there hearts will one day die.
When they find that birthdays are a step closer to the end"

I really, really enjoyed this part the best! Very powerful!

sevensins

thank you! i'm really glad that u liked it. i'm thinking about songifieing it

(((((BE))))))

Being Enlightened

sevensins wrote:

thank you! i'm really glad that u liked it. i'm thinking about songifieing it

(((((BE))))))

You are most welcome!

Songifieing it would be really cool, daddy-o!

You just keep writing and I'll just keep reading (when I can)!

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FinsburyParkCarrots

It would be good, songified.

bambi girl

your words just make me smile seven. you have a most amazing gift, i've said it before and i'll say it again and again!!


beautiful. there are so many lines and words in that which i adored.
thank you!