stream of thought thing
sevensins
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"a play on words"
what drama is staged in this play of critic aclaim!
with no comic relief in sight
she screamed words of hatred with unparted lips
the barbs of silence at the end of her wip
My, my this diologe is supurve
but the cridics are talking, her dilivery is off
The curtain makes haste as the actors change place
now i've got the floor to speak
my monolouge is short but its langege sweet
I opened my lips to speak mind in verse
but my mouth was too dry, lights too bright for my eyes
i studder, and search for the sound
the noises you made when you swore you loved me....
The directors scipt is thrown, the curtain drops
My optertunity lost...but these seconds loose shape, and my thoughts fade to gray, a scale mesures my pain to yours.
I got love in my bed, naked for me...but she turns tail and runs,
from the sins i have done,
Mistakes i write on my face....its taken with grains of salt to open sores,
wondes dressed in the finest lace
what drama is staged in this play of critic aclaim!
with no comic relief in sight
she screamed words of hatred with unparted lips
the barbs of silence at the end of her wip
My, my this diologe is supurve
but the cridics are talking, her dilivery is off
The curtain makes haste as the actors change place
now i've got the floor to speak
my monolouge is short but its langege sweet
I opened my lips to speak mind in verse
but my mouth was too dry, lights too bright for my eyes
i studder, and search for the sound
the noises you made when you swore you loved me....
The directors scipt is thrown, the curtain drops
My optertunity lost...but these seconds loose shape, and my thoughts fade to gray, a scale mesures my pain to yours.
I got love in my bed, naked for me...but she turns tail and runs,
from the sins i have done,
Mistakes i write on my face....its taken with grains of salt to open sores,
wondes dressed in the finest lace
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As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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