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fairys and liars

sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
my diection is dizzy, as I stands for the blow,
that sends me sighing back down to the floor
awake in the moment, a comertial in movement
advirtising my blood on the fabric of her shirt...
wish filled with thinking about the box in the yard, sand fills the cuts on my hands:my calls for the job

the planes will land, and the birds will sing, and everthings moving, cuz its all the same to him, just pick up ur feet, dont drag on the street, lift the pace and find excuses to stay;watch her create space from her eyes, relate movment to crys, spread her stance with her thighs wrapped around him.

I'm afraid we've grown apart, and grown less limbs, fewer hands grabbing for my coffie as the stain soaks in,
I'm spinning plates up on the stage, when a second child's saved,
and there is nothing but the intent of change.
send the signal to the drummer to take it slow
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I enjoyed this. I shall read over it again

    :)
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    depopulationINC wrote:
    I enjoyed this. I shall read over it again

    :)


    thank u kindly
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  • Astral StarAstral Star Posts: 129
    meaty and judicious - Very nice
    "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa
  • sistanumsysistanumsy Posts: 218
    This was written in blood. Very intense.

    'watch her create space from her eyes, relate movment to crys'
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Very enjoyable, sevensins! It's all good but I was really digging the second stanza the best--most excellent!! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    Very enjoyable, sevensins! It's all good but I was really digging the second stanza the best--most excellent!! :)
    thanks BE, it was kinda written at separette times without reading the stanza before it.
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    I was talking to a woman who told me I couldn't get what I already had, until I had aged, 13 more years.

    There are moments in-between thought, in which there is nothing going on but breath. And for the first time in what feels like forever... like, since I was your age... I feel like I know something.

    Don't forget ;)
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