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naive bliss

scat catscat cat Posts: 27
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Those colorful years of naive bliss
Lets conquere the world-Be pissed
Run the streets like anarchists
They can't stop what they can't miss

Then one day just like a train
Naive bliss , now insane
I don't think it was explained
The tragedy of it all in vein
Become a vehicle that blossoms truth and freedom
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    sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    seems like punk poetry, very cool
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    setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Okay I liked that. Good shiite.

    I agree with the punk poetry statement as well, though there appears to be a bit of beat in it. LOL punk can hardly keep a beat. And I say that with love.

    one other question, and I am NOT picking on you scat.

    in the last line do you really mean VEIN or VAIN? I'm just curious. To me, they both work. But I'm a bit of a freak, as you all know.

    thanks for sharing, i really dig it.

    seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
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    scat catscat cat Posts: 27
    I mean vain(?) not as in the veins in your arm. You kinda confused me with that question. I had to think really hard!
    Become a vehicle that blossoms truth and freedom
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    FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    totally agree with ya, and very well said. i like it very very much. classic.
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