Stupid Poem: April 1, 1996

BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Cosmic Father

a babe lays alone
alone in her bed
fears, need in the tiny one
will daddy come
she is dead

footsteps on the floor
she cannot see
is that Him?
please hold me

then....

the face of an angel, hair of jesus
pick me up, hurry me up for fun, cuddle rock and sing

in the rocker, in the corner of a room with no right angles
lays her pink and blue thoughts
in a music box.

he holds her tight,
her cheek to his chest and
he begins to sing

her world now filled with love, her breath drinking in his voice
vibrations that feed her soul to sleep
sleep sleep my child

and if she tells you His name,
you better not say a word or you will
wake her up and that is hell to pay
don't dare take the love away


























stupid, stupid poem
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Comments

  • I agree....
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    pretty good

    sounds a little physcotic for a sec

    and then jesus appears

    i feel better

    and then phsycotic


    "if you try hard enough caring for yourself instead
    being grown up doc then i might check back in for
    some of that good medicine"
    convicted
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    I agree....

    FUCK YOU!!!!!







    How dare you embaraSS me in from of FRIENDS!!!
  • This was a very touching piece. It made me feel like I was being hugged. Have you been hugged today?
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    not by you master......

    give me a song to put in for a hug....


    you choose, i will see if i have it!
  • Baby Got Back
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Baby Got Back

    thats' one thing/song i don't have.

    its more like baby got baby pot belly...!!!

    be fair.

    how about a hug from no code. you choose....
  • Who You Are
    You Are Who
    Who Are You
    How Are You
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Who You Are
    You Are Who
    Who Are You
    How Are You

    I am yours
    a poet who didn't know it
    I am deborah
    and i feel fine

    i like this song and the one to follow. thanks so much!!
  • towertower Posts: 16
    if this is the stupid stuff, wheres the sweet stuff?

    or are you really andrew wood, in disguise, ressurected...

    ;)
    hey, what the hell happened here?
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by tower
    if this is the stupid stuff, wheres the sweet stuff?

    or are you really andrew wood, in disguise, ressurected...

    ;)

    I am deborah, not andy wood, although i wish him peace of mind, this is my mine mind

    The really sweet stuff will come from a future coupling that i have waited for all my life......

    oh so sweet and wonderfully charged these words will be.

    this is how i feel.

    need to justify it, so they become not so stupid.

    you understand?
  • towertower Posts: 16
    no, but if theres pie later, i'll stay and watch

    :D
    hey, what the hell happened here?
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by tower
    no, but if theres pie later, i'll stay and watch

    :D

    I did make a cherry pie last night

    want some cherry pie?
  • towertower Posts: 16
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    pie :D
    hey, what the hell happened here?
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by tower
    no, but if theres pie later, i'll stay and watch

    :D

    yes, we havE pie.

    and it is CHERRY
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    when I go back and read the stuff i have written...it seems like it was a years and years ago.
  • Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    This was a very touching piece. It made me feel like I was being hugged. Have you been hugged today?

    Yes
    Bye
    My
    Teddy Bear

    he has big footsteps
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