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Earth Beware Review

BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
edited May 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Aug. 8, 1995


Poem entitled Earth Beward felt familiar to me. the putrid exsisting simaltaniously when a woman writes in her dairy of all the addictions and lusty wants of her world.

she ends her day watching her baby zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzaw logs through his binkie.

andthespecialpartisthatedthinkmypeicewaslikelooking.

(upon seeing Hieronymus Bosch's painting
"The Garden of Earthly Delights")
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  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by BhagavadGita
    Aug. 8, 1995


    Poem entitled Earth Beward felt familiar to me. the putrid exsisting simaltaniously when a woman writes in her dairy of all the addictions and lusty wants of her world.

    she ends her day watching her baby zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzaw logs through his binkie.

    andthespecialpartisthatedthinkmypeicewaslikelooking.

    (upon seeing Hieronymus Bosch's painting
    "The Garden of Earthly Delights")


    THIS IS THE MOST ROMANTIC AND BEAUTIFUL GESTURE ANYONE WOULD EVER BESTOW ON ME.

    God makes movies....doesn't he?
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    I SAY, ISAy

    I FEEL LIKE PRINCESS DI!

    NOT die
  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    youremorefunthanathesaurusexplosion
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    youremorefunthanathesaurusexplosion

    WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOLDMECLOSERTINYDANCER

    COUNT THE HEADLIGHTS ON THE HWY

    LAY ME DOWN ON SHEETS OF LENIN

    WEVE HAD A BSY DAY TODAY

    COUNTHE HEADLIGHTS.

    lay me down in sheets of lemon, we've had a busy day today.
  • MerkingBoyMerkingBoy Posts: 249
    I 've read some of your posts...
    i must say, you scare me!!!!!
  • PhillyPJPhillyPJ Posts: 1,266
    CNN** is a Cable TV station** they report the news. or do they???
  • PJammin'PJammin' Posts: 1,902
    "lay me down in sheets of lemon, we've had a busy day today."

    hmmm.....never heard this one before. is this like, "lay me down in sheets of linen"? i must say it has a different twist with lemon.....and smell.
    I died. I died and you just stood there. I died and you watched. I died and you walked by and said no. I'm dead.
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by MerkingBoy
    I 've read some of your posts...
    i must say, you scare me!!!!!

    I am suppose to.
  • puremagicpuremagic Posts: 1,907
    Ok, so there's more depth to you then you'd like to show. The Garden of Earthly Delights, nice.
    Originally posted by BhagavadGita
    Aug. 8, 1995


    Poem entitled Earth Beward felt familiar to me. the putrid exsisting simaltaniously when a woman writes in her dairy of all the addictions and lusty wants of her world.

    she ends her day watching her baby zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzaw logs through his binkie.

    andthespecialpartisthatedthinkmypeicewaslikelooking.

    (upon seeing Hieronymus Bosch's painting
    "")
    SIN EATERS--We take the moral excrement we find in this equation and we bury it down deep inside of us so that the rest of our case can stay pure. That is the job. We are morally indefensible and absolutely necessary.
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    mouth is dry she asks for my order
    i look down cause i'm out of town
    got clothes that stink
    and my tooth brush has seen better days

    she's beautiful so i try to hide
    use as little air to keep my

    whatever's left cause when you show
    up in a three dollar kmart tee shirt

    you already lost

    um two bean burrito's please
    she falls over
    i ask for help to perform cpr
    cause everyone knows if i perform
    the dose
    then she's never getting up

    love
    convicted
  • MerkingBoyMerkingBoy Posts: 249
    BhagavadGita wrote:
    I am suppose to.
    that was me then but this is me now. and I like that personally :cool:
    so crazy so unpredictable. PM me if you want some witchcraft sexmate.
  • Drummer98136Drummer98136 Posts: 26
    I heard crazy became...... medicated and very predictable. Looks like the thesaurus stopped exploding and The real James Brown died.
    BOOM-DA-DA-DA-DA-BOOM-BOOM-DA-DA
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Haha, that was when the poetry forum was completely fucking insane.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    lol....

    good times and surreality for all
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