stupid poem i wrote on Jan. 24, 2002

BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
ok believe it or not. i drew an antenna in purple ink in the upper left corner of the page. under it was the word

Radar

Lay Down Beside Me

angel lay down beside me
like you so rarely do
im sure that you could
bee w/ me, if i believe
enough in you


for i fear that by
believeing too much
you set me up for a
falling into the void
of an illusions clutch

and if your spirit
travels over your house
and to my door
you bettter knock louder

cause then i will hear for sure


is a catus just waiting for the Sun
coincedences never stop amazing me and making me
crazy. what are you up to?
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Comments

  • sounds really cool put some music to it
    "thiers still time to escape, youve got time to escape
    thiers still time so escape,,,,
    auuuhhheehhh yaeeahh "
  • towertower Posts: 16
    :D:D:D:D:D

    reminds me a lot of some of the buckley work from the unfinished album, light guitar and afrikaan drums backing, or maybe just some random effect noise (not a cow mooing though) like applause or breathing ... or something.
    hey, what the hell happened here?
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    you like?
  • towertower Posts: 16
    stop blushing, you're toasting my sandwich from here :)
    hey, what the hell happened here?
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