Writers Block

BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Journal entry
Nov. 11, 2002

Impressionist paintings. i don't know much about art, but i think that is how i am living my life right now. i look at things too close up.

i feel like i have a brick in my head. iam looking at this painting of my life up close. too close. i can see the colors of the images, but it all looks too messy. the truth is clouded. i am just too close.

i need to step back.
move the camera
fly higher up

to see the whole picture
i have come too far to not to finish.
wise words say nurture you inner critic

be a GOD MOTHER to myself
be a GOOD MOTHER to myself
be firm but gentle

keep zooming out till the WHOLE EARTH can be seen.
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Comments

  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    you mean as if in a dream
    a premanition
    like walking on the boardwalk
    anticipating a cloud of blood
    and the seeing the swirling
    gathering speed

    arms wrap around my bro
    my sister also

    fear comes and goes

    after hit pass around
    bar demons laugh at the entertainment
    me
    convicted
  • an expresionist
    using water colours
    i paint a rainbow
    kissing perfect lips
    like my sadness
    the hues fade
    then blend together
    before running
    off the canvas
    i catch the drops
    falling off the edge
    cup my hands
    around my mouth
    tasting memories
    of a moment
    frozen deep in time
    she kissed my soul
    she kissed my soul
    she kissed my soul
    she kissed my soul
    with colour
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    the worst emotion i ever known
    unconcious trading of my soul
    atop of the crowd the beasts
    how they grow
    and i pray to wake up
    or so i did
    when i was alive

    the loudness the army of pain
    how i could bring so much happiness
    for the tears they would drain
    inside what they call a dream
    not to me
    is being passed on passed on
    for the comfort of my hurt

    ick
    convicted
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