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iNVisible Poems for my Love of You

BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
where are the words?

I wanted to give you so many

I love you this much? and have nothing
to say? wait.....

I know.
…… where the words and letters are....

They must be sequestered and woven into
all the kisses and hugs I have for you

my arms hold invisible
poems of awe for
how much I can say I am
in my
love for you,
god you are so beautiful to me.
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  • PearlsGirlPearlsGirl Posts: 257
    who is this person?
    Don't let the world bring you down, not everyone here is that fucked up and cold. Remember why you came and while you're alive, experience the warmth before you grow old.

    Best two days of my life: Oasis at MSG and Pearl Jam at the Gorge.
  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    AWWWWWWW
    I can see through that poem from a mile away.

    hehehe get it? see through. invisible poem.

    I'll be here all week.
    Try the chicken wings.
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by PearlsGirl
    who is this person?

    Hi Pearly Girrllyy,
    my name is deborah.
    i am unemployeed and live in west seattle. that's who this person is.

    Who are you?
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    okay so this is my last post

    i pulled up to airport drive
    taxman waitin
    made a new story later
    after i fought from the grave
    learn how to play
    learn how to fly
    show em im more than
    the airport clown
    now what if i couldnt jam

    how much love do i get when
    i cant jam

    im true
    convicted
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    no wait this my last post

    show up at aparty
    they all laughed
    i cried
    i open my mouth
    they all love me
    i died during the laugh

    im not on drugs
    convicted
  • PearlsGirlPearlsGirl Posts: 257
    Originally posted by BhagavadGita
    Hi Pearly Girrllyy,
    my name is deborah.
    i am unemployeed and live in west seattle. that's who this person is.

    Who are you?

    no, who is the poem for?
    your poems are very interesting, they leave me confused sometimes, but overall, I like them.
    Don't let the world bring you down, not everyone here is that fucked up and cold. Remember why you came and while you're alive, experience the warmth before you grow old.

    Best two days of my life: Oasis at MSG and Pearl Jam at the Gorge.
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by keven 33
    no wait this my last post

    show up at aparty
    they all laughed
    i cried
    i open my mouth
    they all love me
    i died during the laugh

    im not on drugs

    Darn it. i thought you were on drugs.
    I was going to ask for some.....dramamine? flying. get motion sickness ever....just fall in love.

    Why did you die during their laugh?
  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Originally posted by keven 33
    im not on drugs

    Prove it. Mail me your piss.
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by PearlsGirl
    no, who is the poem for?
    your poems are very interesting, they leave me confused sometimes, but overall, I like them.

    oh sorry. who the poem is for. well, i guess we can all figure that out.

    everything i write
    everything i say
    has his name in it
    even if it isn't in it

    i know i have a weird
    way of talkin
    just keeps me safe
    without alot of squawken (ok so that was bad)

    yes.
    i will admit it.
    i have a big problem.
    i am in love with someone who doesn't know iam alive.
    someone who i have no chance of having.
    yes. i have been in love with mr. ed from the moment i heard his voice.
    pretty pathetic if you really start thinking about it.
    i left my husband AFTER i heard BLACK and after i saw singles and sleepless in seattle i was a goner.

    yes, it is embarrassing to admit on a pearl jam message board that i am a pathetic loser when it comes to love.

    much easier to love someone you will never meet.
    they can't break your heart
    because it is already broken by the giant chasm
    of the unseen.
  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Debs, that's the most beautiful thing you've written.
    Next to rocket dog's farts, of course.

    I feel your cravings.
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Debs, that's the most beautiful thing you've written.
    Next to rocket dog's farts, of course.

    I feel your cravings.

    You do
    Feel
    my
    cravings?

    no words

    :O
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