I can't eat...
BhagavadGita
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I can't eat.
My stomach is full
of
butterflies
and although wise, to nourish myself
I can't eat.
I'm too in love with you.
Like on the first date.
Who eats?
....stomach is all a flutter
and no nutter butter with milk need fill it now.
You are inside me.
Like the threads of a harp
and the strings of your guitar
and
your baritone,
the voice that can shake a Universe.
Although, I don't fast well
I wish you would come with light speed cause,
I just can't eat.
My stomach is full
of
butterflies
and although wise, to nourish myself
I can't eat.
I'm too in love with you.
Like on the first date.
Who eats?
....stomach is all a flutter
and no nutter butter with milk need fill it now.
You are inside me.
Like the threads of a harp
and the strings of your guitar
and
your baritone,
the voice that can shake a Universe.
Although, I don't fast well
I wish you would come with light speed cause,
I just can't eat.
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an hourlong hot shower and a bowl of chicken noodle soup and learn to play the harp
Love the wordchoice here! Very fun. This whole poem is fun. Makes me sorta miss those feelings in a way. This poem made me smile pretty big.
I'll also mention I like your use of color. It's something I don't employ, but I think if used right can really enhance a poem.
wait, are you trying to seduce me?