dreaming steel

lightbringerlightbringer Posts: 8
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Lost in the soft twillight of your love
i lie waiting for the soft rhythm of your sleep
how long have i listened to you
how long have i watched you?
how long have you tormented me
how long can i hold out?

the chill feeling fills me
the moon lights the blade in my hand
sudden blackness in my sight
where have you gone
i look endlessly
finding only a crimsom trail
the steady drip drip drip of your love slowly fading
i guess you finally gave me all of your heart
i held it in my trembling hands'
breath the smell of death
and finally awake screaming
as you hold me close
calm me
love me
save me
image is everthing
"the punishment suffered by the wise who refuse to take part in the government, is to live under the government of bad men."
plato
if you look at life through rose colored glasses you are going to bump into alot of pink things
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  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    Satans DICK!!!
  • Good poem, lightbringer.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    I didn't mean to post it.
  • wow i dont know what to say.
    image is everthing
    "the punishment suffered by the wise who refuse to take part in the government, is to live under the government of bad men."
    plato
    if you look at life through rose colored glasses you are going to bump into alot of pink things
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    mad?
  • no not mad just speechless......
    and i thought most people on here were nice
    image is everthing
    "the punishment suffered by the wise who refuse to take part in the government, is to live under the government of bad men."
    plato
    if you look at life through rose colored glasses you are going to bump into alot of pink things
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    is more than nice.....she's acrobatically nice.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Don't worry about the begrudgers, lightbringer. There's always one.

    It's a good poem.
  • I watched the world die today
    a little piece at a time
    I watched the light fade today
    leaving only shadow behind
    I saw myself free today
    salvation giving way to sin
    I heard the demons scream today
    tearing apart my soul
    I lost the fight today
    as they dropped me in a hole
    I saw the world die today
    with only the slightest flicker of pain
    I watched the light grow dim
    the syringe still in my vein
    image is everthing
    "the punishment suffered by the wise who refuse to take part in the government, is to live under the government of bad men."
    plato
    if you look at life through rose colored glasses you are going to bump into alot of pink things
  • i have always been here...
    watching and waiting
    feeding on the blood of the weak
    i have killed kings and fucked queens
    i have changed your history to suit my whims.
    lost continents of doubt and pain..
    the sweet ambrosia that fills my mouth with the taste of wasted life

    you look at me and fear,hate , despise
    you laugh at me and mock,humiliate,torture
    you hear me and turn away

    with trembling hands i held the gun
    poited toward the pathetic bag of blood and water trembling on the floor at my feet
    with one simple movement i have changed your life(death) and mine.
    now...
    i move on
    still watching and waiting
    image is everthing
    "the punishment suffered by the wise who refuse to take part in the government, is to live under the government of bad men."
    plato
    if you look at life through rose colored glasses you are going to bump into alot of pink things
  • This would go great with an acoustic guitar in hand
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    MAD!
  • Why you haven't been banned, Amaterasu, is absolutely beyond the limits of my comprehension. You're back on "Ignore".
  • Very nice writing there lightbringer, I loved it!
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    is beyond your comprehension
    and two you wouldn't have
    anything to say!
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    Originally posted by lightbringer
    Lost in the soft twillight of your love
    i lie waiting for the soft rhythm of your sleep
    how long have i listened to you
    how long have i watched you?
    how long have you tormented me
    how long can i hold out?

    the chill feeling fills me
    the moon lights the blade in my hand
    sudden blackness in my sight
    where have you gone
    i look endlessly
    finding only a crimsom trail
    the steady drip drip drip of your love slowly fading
    i guess you finally gave me all of your heart
    i held it in my trembling hands'
    breath the smell of death
    and finally awake screaming
    as you hold me close
    calm me
    love me
    save me

    I really enjoyed reading this one... Lovely words... keep 'em coming!
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    Originally posted by lightbringer
    I watched the world die today
    a little piece at a time
    I watched the light fade today
    leaving only shadow behind
    I saw myself free today
    salvation giving way to sin
    I heard the demons scream today
    tearing apart my soul
    I lost the fight today
    as they dropped me in a hole
    I saw the world die today
    with only the slightest flicker of pain
    I watched the light grow dim
    the syringe still in my vein

    I can feel your feelings...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • youre writing is very beautiful. thank you for sharing it with us.
  • she walks with passion cascading echos of light
    a kalidascope of pain tearing symphonic shards of emotion
    she talks with melodic chimes of angelic music
    drawing you deeper into her sweet grave
    she sees with the edge of truth
    watching all in exalted glory

    skeleton cloudriders moving thru the night sky
    endless stars burning bright
    galaxys spiral in the endless ballet
    she stands like a monolith
    taller than the doubt and fear
    the flicker of helplessnes

    she walks with pasion
    drawing me to her flickering flame
    a moth drawn to the killing light
    stealing my soul , my breath , my life

    i stand battered and bloody
    scars on display
    i stand battered and bloody
    scars on display
    i stand battered and bloody
    scars on display
    each one etched upon my body like tattoos telling my history
    each one etched upon my soul
    a shatterd mirror in your eyes
    image is everthing
    "the punishment suffered by the wise who refuse to take part in the government, is to live under the government of bad men."
    plato
    if you look at life through rose colored glasses you are going to bump into alot of pink things
  • http://image.inkfrog.com/pix/rhet/pupagain.jpg
    sleep , sleep my little darling
    dream of open fields and sunny skies
    chase the dream rabbits thru a maze of memories
    wake in the morning an innocent soul
    loyal and brave
    unselfishly loving every minute in my prescence
    never asking only staying silently by my side forever
    image is everthing
    "the punishment suffered by the wise who refuse to take part in the government, is to live under the government of bad men."
    plato
    if you look at life through rose colored glasses you are going to bump into alot of pink things
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