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Take me

RUNAWAYDLMDRUNAWAYDLMD Posts: 19
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I stand
Arms out to the side
Much room between I
and the ground to fly

Take me back
Could you take me back
Could you take me back
oh young love

I stand where Angels land

Dreams of where to be
To be somewhere else
Anywhere, anywhere, anywhere
but here

Gray storm stories
Try to sleep
Here it comes again
4am....ahh....ohh...
Here I go again

Take me back............
Could you take me back
I close my eyes
Could you take me back

I stand where Angels land

Past the window
Reaching for light
I am a reflection
looking out from the inside

Hows it feel to be in one place?
Hows it feel not to see the world?
Hows it feel to know there is so
much out there?

Ooooh take me back
could you take me back
take me back..........

I close my eyes

That's not good enough
that's not good enough
that's not good enough
That's not right.

I once stood where Angels land......

Take me back...





Every night I slept under stars, every night I could see the Milky Way, every night I followed the satellites, every night there were shooting stars.........every night I thought of her.
DON'T LET ME DOWN!!!!
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Comments

  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Is this a song?
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  • RUNAWAYDLMDRUNAWAYDLMD Posts: 19
    When I write sometimes, I think of it as a song and have a tune in my head, so I go ahead and write in what I'm think that part of the song would be. Also, I write an "oh" or "ah", to try to express some kind of emotion. I'm not sure if it's taken that way or not. Actually I very rarely write those words in. I guess I did for this one cause it was right off the top of my head.
    DON'T LET ME DOWN!!!!
  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    very awesome, love it..thanks for sharing
  • RUNAWAYDLMDRUNAWAYDLMD Posts: 19
    Originally posted by FancyFacade
    very awesome, love it..thanks for sharing

    Thanks! I'm happy to know someone likes this. Appreciate it!:D


    I was wondering if anybody could tell what place I was speaking about, I guess maybe if you've been to this National Park you might know.
    DON'T LET ME DOWN!!!!
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