"secret gift"

FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
for one man alone
i think he's that awesome

--more awesome than the typical guy

with his hand held out
to take me by the hand

oh--it seems so romantic

when he takes me to the bar
buys me a new dress
shows more than id like to express

oh yes--just so romantic

when he expects me to be some doll
and that's not really me at all

how can you fall in love
with a ceramic perfect beauty

drop it on the floor
and it breaks in a thousand pieces

that was then-
this is now---

no need to impress a single one

and my secret gift
is for one alone

see--the one with whom it is meant to be
he will love me for me
not the clothes/not the looks

and if you think its any different
you have not found it yet
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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    i like this poem.. i hear a statement of independence and i feelthat you have found a love that is real.. thanks for sharing :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • thank you for your compliment. :)
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Hail hail the lucky ones, i refer to those in love...
    Another really nice poem.
    Oh and thanks for complementing my poem as well. :-)
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
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