typical day

FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
screams fill the air
im going deaf.

never will you feel peace
5 year old expected to solve
civil engineering math problems
and understand
why her legs were cut off
so the 300 lb. man could eat more fat.

still this,
he didnt leave her alone.

her sleep was false-
fear in her own
mother's arms
enemies far and wide
even more outside
-the odd, strange
unfriendly freak.

he wanted her hands
and her eyes.

he cut them off too.

she couldnt say a word-
just listen to the screams

she died listening to these screams
and hell--was like heaven
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  • Originally posted by FancyFacade
    screams fill the air
    im going deaf.

    never will you feel peace
    5 year old expected to solve
    civil engineering math problems
    and understand
    why her legs were cut off
    so the 300 lb. man could eat more fat.

    still this,
    he didnt leave her alone.

    her sleep was false-
    fear in her own
    mother's arms
    enemies far and wide
    even more outside
    -the odd, strange
    unfriendly freak.

    he wanted her hands
    and her eyes.

    he cut them off too.

    she couldnt say a word-
    just listen to the screams

    she died listening to these screams
    and hell--was like heaven

    That was so good I thought I'd quote it.

    :) Every piece you include extends upon the last in terms of its ability to engage me as a reader. Thanks.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    that's incredibly powerful......:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    thanks yall. :)
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