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two little Kitties........

DrOwniNG-DOGDrOwniNG-DOG Posts: 35
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
one little Kitty...
silent and shy
two little Kitties...
were bound to die

one little Madman...
carefully chosed
two little Kitties...
feared the most

one little bundle...
of rope and knife
three little people...
in a peaceful life

one little Madman...
hiding beneith
two little Kitties...
to rest their feet

one little minute...
is all you need
two little seconds...
of pain and grief

one little smalltown...
of peace and life
two little Kitties...
killed by knife

one little Madman...
got his bite
two little angels...
are crying... tonight
no please...
spare the sarcasm of my voice...
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  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    chosed?
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  • DrOwniNG-DOGDrOwniNG-DOG Posts: 35
    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    chosed?

    i dont know........ well...... yes, chosed.......

    you're making me nervous!
    no please...
    spare the sarcasm of my voice...
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by DrOwniNG-DOG
    i dont know........ well...... yes, chosed.......

    you're making me nervous!

    Sorry, yo. I really liked the sinister overtone and the child-like simplicity of this poem. They mingle well, in a twisted sort of way.

    I just couldn't get "chosed" out of my head. ;)
    • 98 Pgh
    • 00 Pgh
    • 03 Pgh|Philly|PSU|Camden 1+2|Hershey
    • 04 Boston 1|Reading
    • 05 Philly
    • 06 Camden 1+2|Pgh
    • 08 Camden 1+2|Hartford|Mansfield 2
    • 09 Philly 1 [EV]|Toronto|Spectrum 1-4
    • 10 Cleveland|Buffalo
    • 11 Philly [EV]|PJ20
    • 12 Philly
    • 13 London|Pgh|Buff|Philly 1+2|Balt
    • 14 Cincy|StL
    • 16 Philly 1+2|Philly 2 [TotD]
    • 18 Boston 1+2
  • DrOwniNG-DOGDrOwniNG-DOG Posts: 35
    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    Sorry, yo. I really liked the sinister overtone and the child-like simplicity of this poem. They mingle well, in a twisted sort of way.

    I just couldn't get "chosed" out of my head. ;)

    thank you.......
    no please...
    spare the sarcasm of my voice...
  • loveandrew-woodloveandrew-wood Posts: 131
    that is superior flow
    but its crazy


    you and keven could probably get along



    "the killer is the one who holds the fear"
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