hi.....i'm new here...so probably it will suck...
mangul
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ok, i'm new here so probably this will suck, and the fact that i'm form venezuela doesn't helps alot...anyway here it goes...hope you enjoy it..
would you like me to paint your sky?
wich colours should i use?
blue, black and grey
or is it red white and carmesy?
one night painting your ceiling
i could live it like a last call
i could live it with such a damn joy
but i could never feel, like i want it to be done
so my brush starts moving
like it has a mind of it's own
my canvas starts getting shape
and i think i can see you
a mirror of thoughts
a candle of shades
the releasing of this emotion
it's been quite a dream
the end
would you like me to paint your sky?
wich colours should i use?
blue, black and grey
or is it red white and carmesy?
one night painting your ceiling
i could live it like a last call
i could live it with such a damn joy
but i could never feel, like i want it to be done
so my brush starts moving
like it has a mind of it's own
my canvas starts getting shape
and i think i can see you
a mirror of thoughts
a candle of shades
the releasing of this emotion
it's been quite a dream
the end
"No, not that way, you yuppie scumbag...This way!" McCready grabs the guitar, whips it around his head like it was a woodchopper's axe and brings it crashing down in an explosion of splinter. "There, now you try it."
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i like it, good imagery.
hope you post more
Lizi
i disagree
i had a girlfriend once who was new to things and she started with suckage but didn't suck at suckage so i was happy
any way
its a good poem
and never underestimate yourself right off the bat
if anything tell us you're the best poet ever
that's what i did (do)
are you saying that when new, she sucked but even while sucking there was a certain je n'sais que about her sucking as if to say that she was good at sucking and then later became much better at sucking which made her not suck anmore
or is it that
she actually doesn't suck at all and acting as though she sucks is why she sucks so much?
ahehe my head hurts...
www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
no one is around.
why is it when one person is gone, you are all gone.
for me, this post is suckage to the max because really all it is is inner dialog being thrown at the pearl jam message board because i suck at spending time alone and i guess i am a total ego maniacattack and i admited that and that is ok and people like me stuart smallsville said so and i got not one christmas card fromanyoen and that is good cause they know i am green and would hatte the paper it was printed on and gee i feel like goulet. i know. and i have had two drinks and feeling absolutely nothing and im suppsing to be packing and and im trying to decide what music i want to take for three weeks and wehre are all my friends and i look like an idiot always standing alone at night inthe forumhut thing allalone. no one here thsi sucks. you are all having sex or attending the theater or having lives while i write this babble your couldn't begin to suck from a straw because it is so beyond suckable.
no letters.
nothing.
sigh.
sucking sounds
you never know when there are others in the shadows...
but don't be afraid. i'm a friendly shadow
www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
I was just thinking about painting a ceiling! I think creamy shade would be just right.
Jim Carrol
its the first one
i think she got bored of sucking
but i never did
wait...are we still talking about sucking at suckage
or are we talking about
suckage that sucks when sucked and the sucking that goes on behind curtain number 1
goulet you are adorable at sucking and being sucked.